Time Paused Today
A Rondaful65 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Tony,
A splendid Rondaful, sad, but marvelous imagery.
The verse seems to pause, just like time.
Memories can do that.
The rhymes blend in unnoticed, like a sigh.
Of course, to some, "bird" has several meaning.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
Hello Tony,
A splendid Rondaful, sad, but marvelous imagery.
The verse seems to pause, just like time.
Memories can do that.
The rhymes blend in unnoticed, like a sigh.
Of course, to some, "bird" has several meaning.
Robert
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Robert, and for the sixth star. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely poem, and I must say, you are very talented. I would give you six stars because of the smooth flow here, but I don't have any left. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
This is a lovely poem, and I must say, you are very talented. I would give you six stars because of the smooth flow here, but I don't have any left. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Susan, and for the whisper of a sixth star. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Ulla
Hi Tony, its a lovely poem you've written about new love springng back to mind. The smallest things can trigger an almost forgotten memory of a passionate love that has not been forgotten, but which has morphed into a lovely habit.
You've mastered Dolly's form admirably. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
Hi Tony, its a lovely poem you've written about new love springng back to mind. The smallest things can trigger an almost forgotten memory of a passionate love that has not been forgotten, but which has morphed into a lovely habit.
You've mastered Dolly's form admirably. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your affirming comments, Ulla.. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from david rinaldi
Wow, beautiful. Very well constructed poem and tells a story without the details. Reminds me of Emily Dickinson writing:" Tell all the truth butb tell it slant." Sad but heartfelt.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
Wow, beautiful. Very well constructed poem and tells a story without the details. Reminds me of Emily Dickinson writing:" Tell all the truth butb tell it slant." Sad but heartfelt.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review, David, and your comment about Emily Dickinson. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Tony, such a moving, well written poem. Lost love is always a popular subject in poetry. This form of Dolly's is unusual - you have made a lovely, thoughtful poem with it. I loved it - particularly your last two lines - so sad. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
Hello Tony, such a moving, well written poem. Lost love is always a popular subject in poetry. This form of Dolly's is unusual - you have made a lovely, thoughtful poem with it. I loved it - particularly your last two lines - so sad. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your most affirming comments, Dorothy. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from victor 66
Your poem resonated deep feelings of love and loss. I also appreciate your extensive description of how you created this artistic piece of work. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
Your poem resonated deep feelings of love and loss. I also appreciate your extensive description of how you created this artistic piece of work. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us. Best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your affirming comments, Victor. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
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You're most welcome, Tony.
Comment from TPAC
A super read like the selected ingredients for this particular stir, finding all presented viewpoints appealing to the readers interests. A profound usage of nature defining of self. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
A super read like the selected ingredients for this particular stir, finding all presented viewpoints appealing to the readers interests. A profound usage of nature defining of self. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your comments, TPAC. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Susan Larson
"as my memory of you took wing," What a beautiful line. I don't know if the bird is specifically related to a memory of a loved one, but certain things - fish, deer, ladybugs, pink roses, bluebirds - appear and yes, "that bird was you"
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
"as my memory of you took wing," What a beautiful line. I don't know if the bird is specifically related to a memory of a loved one, but certain things - fish, deer, ladybugs, pink roses, bluebirds - appear and yes, "that bird was you"
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your affirming comments, Susan. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very beautiful poem with a great elegance and style. I can't say I am too crazy about this new form, but what you did is gorgeous. A great picture to accompany your words, imagery and visuals are phenomenal, I enjoyed the read very much.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
A very beautiful poem with a great elegance and style. I can't say I am too crazy about this new form, but what you did is gorgeous. A great picture to accompany your words, imagery and visuals are phenomenal, I enjoyed the read very much.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your kind review, Yelena. Appreciated.
Best wishes, Tony
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You did a beautiful job, Tony. I am just not too crazy about this form.
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I am too much of a classic, I guess (smile). Some of this created forms don't work for me. But you did a gorgeous job.
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. Well written. I like your piece of poetry. Beautiful poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it a lot. Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
I like how you structured this poem. Well written. I like your piece of poetry. Beautiful poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it a lot. Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Many thanks for your supportive review, Raul. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony