Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Ha, ha, ha so much of and og that makes your poem so sweet and funny. I think I have seen one of these frogs. I love the musicality of this poem. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thank you for your nice review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your fun "nonsense" poem which turned out to be just a surprising dream. I liked all your "og" rhymes as the poem was almost a monorhyme!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020

Thank you for your nice review.

Comment from Lucy de Welles

Excellent

Fabulous, simple, cute rhyming, funny topic, evokes a comical scene in the mind of the reader. Great picture, and well-chosen coloring. Didn't see the dream coming!
Well done!
xxLucy

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020

Thanks for the lovely review, I appreciate it greatly.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

You had me going, your poem painted quite a funny picture show. Your rhymes made your poem more appealing. Your picture added to the fun. Your entire presentation gets a thumbs up.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020

Thanks for the lovely review, I appreciate it greatly.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the terrible fright you have caused by a bullfrog while eating your hotdog and when you fall from the log you find with relief that was all just a dream.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020

Thanks for the lovely review, I appreciate it greatly.

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

This is quite close to being a completely-monorhyme poem and it was so much fun to read. Frogs and bogs and logs, etc. contribute strong material that really could infuse someone's dream. Sweet!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thank you for your review,

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Haha, what a fun poem, Patricia. I got a laugh from it. Your lines read well with great imagery. This is uplifting in the way we all need to laugh and smile each day.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thank you for your review,

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

This silly piece made me smile, Patricia. Hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it. As I read each line, I pictured it. Surprise ending.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thank you for your review,

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a fun write about this dream you had Patricia, I expect bullfrogs do scare dogs! Ha ha ha, this is a bit like mono-rhyming, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thank you for your review, it was indeed a fun one to write.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I enjoyed the fun humor in this, and your work with monorhyme was great.
You found so many words to rhyme with log. I especially liked your use of slog. Using the fun rhymes, you were able to create a visual image of what you were seeing. Stands to reason it would be a dream. judi

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020

Thank you for your review, it was a fun write.

reply by judiverse on 01-Aug-2020

You're welcome. It certainly was fun. Have a great weekend. judi