O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from MM lives on :)
wow.. and another poem you have so graced us with Alcreator Litt Dear.. Nice work weaving this soul felt piece of writing. Well written and expressed through and through. Thank you for sharing..
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wow.. and another poem you have so graced us with Alcreator Litt Dear.. Nice work weaving this soul felt piece of writing. Well written and expressed through and through. Thank you for sharing..
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Creative77
What a lovely poem. I love the descriptive words you chose. I can't wait for warmer weather to arrive myself. Job well done!
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What a lovely poem. I love the descriptive words you chose. I can't wait for warmer weather to arrive myself. Job well done!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from muezza56
i enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem, it's really well written as the poet looks at the changing seasons, nice accompanying picture with goes well with the theme
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i enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem, it's really well written as the poet looks at the changing seasons, nice accompanying picture with goes well with the theme
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from dannyleonn
Isn't it phenomenal how so few words can invoke such emotion, beauty and memory? This is a beautiful piece. Goosebumps tickled my arms.
"shine hopes , glow minds" - incredible interpretation of the season.
I especially enjoyed the grammar lesson in your author note.
Thank you for your gift. Starting from the beginning of your book now!
Best regards.
Deonna
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Isn't it phenomenal how so few words can invoke such emotion, beauty and memory? This is a beautiful piece. Goosebumps tickled my arms.
"shine hopes , glow minds" - incredible interpretation of the season.
I especially enjoyed the grammar lesson in your author note.
Thank you for your gift. Starting from the beginning of your book now!
Best regards.
Deonna
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Isaac Kavik
Darl WILL eventually go if you mean dark as the evil one. The battle is all ready won, the enemy is defeated and victory is surely assured. A nice write. I enjoyed the English lesson in the comments.
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Darl WILL eventually go if you mean dark as the evil one. The battle is all ready won, the enemy is defeated and victory is surely assured. A nice write. I enjoyed the English lesson in the comments.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is ok but it is lacking something you have the bare bones for an idea but much more needs to be said I feel regards Jill
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This is ok but it is lacking something you have the bare bones for an idea but much more needs to be said I feel regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Papabearua
A distinctive 5-7-5 poem bidding spring good bye and welcoming summer. What dark must go? If going from winter to spring I could understand the dark but I have a problem going from spring to summer.
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A distinctive 5-7-5 poem bidding spring good bye and welcoming summer. What dark must go? If going from winter to spring I could understand the dark but I have a problem going from spring to summer.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Alcreator,
I did enjoy reading this 5/7/5 poem several times. I rarely write haiku or senyru as I am not very good at writing them. However, you are so keep it up. Your second line is the most compelling. Well done, chey
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Hi Alcreator,
I did enjoy reading this 5/7/5 poem several times. I rarely write haiku or senyru as I am not very good at writing them. However, you are so keep it up. Your second line is the most compelling. Well done, chey
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Tina McKala
Another interesting poem from you. This 5-7-5 form is really tricky, syllables are good, but to put the message in words that make a reader say wow at the end is another thing. I believe this poem needs a little polishing, the message is nice, but there is something that doesn't fit to my ear.
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Another interesting poem from you. This 5-7-5 form is really tricky, syllables are good, but to put the message in words that make a reader say wow at the end is another thing. I believe this poem needs a little polishing, the message is nice, but there is something that doesn't fit to my ear.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from I.C. Sanford
I really like your enigmatic style. This poem in particular reminds me of how much i cant wait for spring to return to central WA! Good job.
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I really like your enigmatic style. This poem in particular reminds me of how much i cant wait for spring to return to central WA! Good job.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
