O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Starlit Ink
I like how this poem not only speaks of spring, but also welcomes the bright sun of summer. There is hope of many bright days ahead. You don't want dark to go, since the sun can enlighten a weary mind.
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I like how this poem not only speaks of spring, but also welcomes the bright sun of summer. There is hope of many bright days ahead. You don't want dark to go, since the sun can enlighten a weary mind.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
Spring is the season of hope and new, fresh ideas.
Winter and all it's darkness gone, things are changing as the sun weaves its magic.
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Spring is the season of hope and new, fresh ideas.
Winter and all it's darkness gone, things are changing as the sun weaves its magic.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from SPOLIN
Thanks for the explanation about "Must dark go!", because I was about to comment on that. Of course it is the poets choice, but for the reader the syntax is off putting.
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Thanks for the explanation about "Must dark go!", because I was about to comment on that. Of course it is the poets choice, but for the reader the syntax is off putting.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from schihigh
I liked this one as well, it gives me a sense of sadness at the loss of spring, but happiness at the continuance of life. All of those poems make you think, and I really like them.
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I liked this one as well, it gives me a sense of sadness at the loss of spring, but happiness at the continuance of life. All of those poems make you think, and I really like them.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from juliedickson55
Thanks for the explanation of Must Dark Go...very interesting, the emphatic...it has an old style feel to it, like old English.
I like the middle line- there is a lot of hope in your words.
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Thanks for the explanation of Must Dark Go...very interesting, the emphatic...it has an old style feel to it, like old English.
I like the middle line- there is a lot of hope in your words.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from beccabootie123
again you tease. is this book available. perfect genre of poetry to write short verses about our lord. well written and would love to read more.
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again you tease. is this book available. perfect genre of poetry to write short verses about our lord. well written and would love to read more.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I think your style tends to think dark instead of light. I like the idea of this one and the fact you are giving these 5-7-5 styles a chance isn't an easy thing to do. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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I think your style tends to think dark instead of light. I like the idea of this one and the fact you are giving these 5-7-5 styles a chance isn't an easy thing to do. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from GarthL
5-7-5 syllable perfect and it does say a lot in those few words. Spring is a wonderfully refreshing season of rejuvenation and makes way to the heat and extended light of summer. I'm not sure why dark must go because they are two sides of the one coin unless it is analogous to the dark shadow of life which is all the calamity and misdeeds that people perpetrate. I believe this is the point you are making. Unusual write but also thought provoking. Good illustration also. StriveOn, Garth
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5-7-5 syllable perfect and it does say a lot in those few words. Spring is a wonderfully refreshing season of rejuvenation and makes way to the heat and extended light of summer. I'm not sure why dark must go because they are two sides of the one coin unless it is analogous to the dark shadow of life which is all the calamity and misdeeds that people perpetrate. I believe this is the point you are making. Unusual write but also thought provoking. Good illustration also. StriveOn, Garth
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from kashmayank
well said in a few words you gave a very good message spring is season of hopr and change good description I liked it all the best
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well said in a few words you gave a very good message spring is season of hopr and change good description I liked it all the best
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another thought provoking poem, you are very good at that. You can do a lot with your few words. At times I am not sure what you are saying and other times it is crystal clear. Your book is going to make an interesting read. xsx Sandra
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Another thought provoking poem, you are very good at that. You can do a lot with your few words. At times I am not sure what you are saying and other times it is crystal clear. Your book is going to make an interesting read. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
