Save The Children
A contest poem...34 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Diana,
Thank you for bringing this despicable situation to light in your well-crafted 6 word poem. Child-trafficking, pedophilia, etc. must be addressed and stopped! There is far too much denial and silence, but I do believe times are changing as more and more individuals speak out against this tragedy that affects all of us on many levels...
Take Care!
diane
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Hello Diana,
Thank you for bringing this despicable situation to light in your well-crafted 6 word poem. Child-trafficking, pedophilia, etc. must be addressed and stopped! There is far too much denial and silence, but I do believe times are changing as more and more individuals speak out against this tragedy that affects all of us on many levels...
Take Care!
diane
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from LisaMay
Hello Diana - i've missed you!
Now here you are, being a voice of social conscience through the weapon of poetry, bringing these shameful statistics to the fore, bringing the dark to the light.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Hello Diana - i've missed you!
Now here you are, being a voice of social conscience through the weapon of poetry, bringing these shameful statistics to the fore, bringing the dark to the light.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Geez, i have missed you too. Life changed quite a bit for me since this Covid invasion. Longer work hours and family filling my house. Too much to focus on writing now, but hopefully, i'll be back to my passion soon. appreciate you took time to read this. Just breaks my heart. sending much love!! xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from royowen
Yes I was on a mission trip to Cambodia that's involved in "buying" back children sold into that sort of industry, I'm appalled that a child can be exploited into this industry, those stats are reprehensible, beautifully written, well dine. Blessings, Roy
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Yes I was on a mission trip to Cambodia that's involved in "buying" back children sold into that sort of industry, I'm appalled that a child can be exploited into this industry, those stats are reprehensible, beautifully written, well dine. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent 6 word poem Diana. I read your notes in unbelief so I checked the reference you quoted and was horrified to learn that you are right.
Thank you for bringing attention to a dispicable story. While many are taken by family members, there are still THOUSANDS taken for a multitude of reasons and most of them bad.
Thank you again for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
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Excellent 6 word poem Diana. I read your notes in unbelief so I checked the reference you quoted and was horrified to learn that you are right.
Thank you for bringing attention to a dispicable story. While many are taken by family members, there are still THOUSANDS taken for a multitude of reasons and most of them bad.
Thank you again for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from dragonpoet
These six words tell the saddest and scariest story ever. Human trafficking is something that needs to end. Good artwork. It could be used with a different words for ending hunger and poverty too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
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These six words tell the saddest and scariest story ever. Human trafficking is something that needs to end. Good artwork. It could be used with a different words for ending hunger and poverty too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a very powerful poem, and I only wish I had a six for it. Thank you for providing us with staggering facts of children trafficking. This is absolutely gruesome. Thanks for this information, and I will read the article you provided a link for.
The child depicted in the picture is striking. It's clear that she is ill - all the marks on her face, they speak louder than words.
Great artistic presentation and message - "If you don't stop this, who will?"
I am not even mentioning contests here, but this should do very well, in fact, I may be looking at the winner.
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This is a very powerful poem, and I only wish I had a six for it. Thank you for providing us with staggering facts of children trafficking. This is absolutely gruesome. Thanks for this information, and I will read the article you provided a link for.
The child depicted in the picture is striking. It's clear that she is ill - all the marks on her face, they speak louder than words.
Great artistic presentation and message - "If you don't stop this, who will?"
I am not even mentioning contests here, but this should do very well, in fact, I may be looking at the winner.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Diana! You're back! I was wondering where you have been. Glad to see you writing again.
Thank you for bringing attention to this horrible thing that is happening in the world. Your six word poem brings light to the situation. Very few of our running candidates said that they are working on this.
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Diana! You're back! I was wondering where you have been. Glad to see you writing again.
Thank you for bringing attention to this horrible thing that is happening in the world. Your six word poem brings light to the situation. Very few of our running candidates said that they are working on this.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from gramalot8
Loved your insightful message. We are involved with the OUR ( Operation Underground Railroad) in Utah. It is so sad and unbelievable how rampant trafficking is. I hope and pray these groups can help the situation.
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Loved your insightful message. We are involved with the OUR ( Operation Underground Railroad) in Utah. It is so sad and unbelievable how rampant trafficking is. I hope and pray these groups can help the situation.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, upsetting, and creative. The author's notes brought me to tears. I will say a prayer for these precious ones.
The artwork makes these words even more intense. Good to see you
writing again. Have a great weekend!
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The author's words are heartfelt, upsetting, and creative. The author's notes brought me to tears. I will say a prayer for these precious ones.
The artwork makes these words even more intense. Good to see you
writing again. Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from elchupakabra
Oh man this is literally such a wormhole on the internet, from Trump to Clinton to Epstein to Wayfair to that new lady that just got arrested, whatserface? Ghislaine? Anyways, really great work here, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Later daze.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Oh man this is literally such a wormhole on the internet, from Trump to Clinton to Epstein to Wayfair to that new lady that just got arrested, whatserface? Ghislaine? Anyways, really great work here, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Later daze.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks So much for your review and stars. This is actually the greatest of the battles going on. All else happening has everything to do with this issue. Appreciate you stopped to read. xoxo
