Astray
Isolation is debilitating (and more) to some...27 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
A very well written philosophical piece in this short verse. I stopped and thought about it and agree that it is the unknown that causes us to fear and fear lost. Well done, Yvette!
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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A very well written philosophical piece in this short verse. I stopped and thought about it and agree that it is the unknown that causes us to fear and fear lost. Well done, Yvette!
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, my lady! Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from angel123
Your message about loneliness and lost of self is profoundly stated. I enjoyed reading it and I wish I had six stars to rate you. Your artwork choice is exceptional and the use of it enhanced your message. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Your message about loneliness and lost of self is profoundly stated. I enjoyed reading it and I wish I had six stars to rate you. Your artwork choice is exceptional and the use of it enhanced your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My thanks, angel, for this wonderful and encouraging review this afternoon - your words mean alot. Enjoy the rest of the weekend!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I can feel countless and endless space in this piece. There is so much out there that if we do not have a grounding point we will wonder for the rest of our lives never finding our way home. That is what this piece says to me.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I can feel countless and endless space in this piece. There is so much out there that if we do not have a grounding point we will wonder for the rest of our lives never finding our way home. That is what this piece says to me.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My thanks, Mia, for your awesome and insightful review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Having an imagination is wonderful--a blessing, sometimes. When turned
loose, it can take us to a beautiful flower garden or a dungeon. It depends, I suppose, on what's going on in our lives at the time. Your poem is excellent--descriptive and thought-provoking.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Having an imagination is wonderful--a blessing, sometimes. When turned
loose, it can take us to a beautiful flower garden or a dungeon. It depends, I suppose, on what's going on in our lives at the time. Your poem is excellent--descriptive and thought-provoking.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My thanks, Janice, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from Lobber
Neat entry.... 3 powerful images in only 3 lines ..... like the use of alliteration .... also like the 4th image the art offers. ... Good luck
- Lobber
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Neat entry.... 3 powerful images in only 3 lines ..... like the use of alliteration .... also like the 4th image the art offers. ... Good luck
- Lobber
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My thanks, Jer, for your review on this short one today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Lost writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Lost writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My thanks, Rebecca, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 lost poem about the mind that sometimes getting lost while the body seems to function normally with an absent minded that doesn't know who or where they are.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 lost poem about the mind that sometimes getting lost while the body seems to function normally with an absent minded that doesn't know who or where they are.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My thanks, Sandra, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from zanya
Yes our minds are such a mystery both to ourselves and to others -food for thought here especially in these times we are living through as we struggle to make sense of it all 'fear's unknown fields'
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Yes our minds are such a mystery both to ourselves and to others -food for thought here especially in these times we are living through as we struggle to make sense of it all 'fear's unknown fields'
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My thanks, Zanya, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the
effective use of
one continuous thought.
-A good topic and imagery.
-The message is a good one
as you describe the wandering
of the "untethered mind"
in "unknown fields."
-Too many are experiencing
this on a daily basis.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the
effective use of
one continuous thought.
-A good topic and imagery.
-The message is a good one
as you describe the wandering
of the "untethered mind"
in "unknown fields."
-Too many are experiencing
this on a daily basis.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks much, Pam, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
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You are very welcome, and you do the same.
Comment from The Death
It's an excellent poem which captured how lack of support can make one feel lost. Fine use of personification and metaphor. Good use of R consonance as well. Fine presentation. This should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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It's an excellent poem which captured how lack of support can make one feel lost. Fine use of personification and metaphor. Good use of R consonance as well. Fine presentation. This should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thanx for stopping by on this 'shortie', sir -- be sure to drop in again some time!! ;) Take care of you and have a great week! ;) Yvette
