Astray
Isolation is debilitating (and more) to some...27 total reviews
Comment from mauial
I love the rhythmic flow of your poem. The first line lost without tether is intriguing. Could love be the tether the sequestered mind needs? Isolation can indeed be fear's unknown fields.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I love the rhythmic flow of your poem. The first line lost without tether is intriguing. Could love be the tether the sequestered mind needs? Isolation can indeed be fear's unknown fields.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, manual, for your review this morning. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from humpwhistle
I'm not sure if you're referring to the emotionally self-sequestered, or those of us who find the current rules against socializing a burden. In normal times, I'd believe you mean the former, but now, I'm thinking the latter. I'd find a little context helpful. To me, the two conditions are quite different.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I'm not sure if you're referring to the emotionally self-sequestered, or those of us who find the current rules against socializing a burden. In normal times, I'd believe you mean the former, but now, I'm thinking the latter. I'd find a little context helpful. To me, the two conditions are quite different.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Lee, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Lost mind wanders unknown fields - this is the essence of this poem and in a way it opens a different perspective and understanding upon life and death matter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Lost mind wanders unknown fields - this is the essence of this poem and in a way it opens a different perspective and understanding upon life and death matter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Iza, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all need an anchor and it usually comes from family and the need to belong and live without fear is strong, it is human nature to be together when we feel strength in numbers, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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We all need an anchor and it usually comes from family and the need to belong and live without fear is strong, it is human nature to be together when we feel strength in numbers, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Dolly, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very interesting rendition of the contest, each line speaks volumes; great descriptive imagery and visuals, an amazing artistic presentation and artwork.
An very well crafted poem, should do well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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A very interesting rendition of the contest, each line speaks volumes; great descriptive imagery and visuals, an amazing artistic presentation and artwork.
An very well crafted poem, should do well in the contest.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Eternal Muse, for your review today. Enjoy the weekend!
Comment from rspoet
Excellent 5-7-5 poem that is quite relevant these days.
Some have more trouble than others dealing with the isolation.
Excellent wording and nice touch of alliteration.
Good choice of art work too.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Excellent 5-7-5 poem that is quite relevant these days.
Some have more trouble than others dealing with the isolation.
Excellent wording and nice touch of alliteration.
Good choice of art work too.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Many thanks and a wonderful evening to you!
Comment from J'nea D'on
Wow! Very powerful and amazing! Your word choice was excellent for this contest entry! Left to one's own imagination in the frightening world of "what ifs."
Best of luck in your writing!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Wow! Very powerful and amazing! Your word choice was excellent for this contest entry! Left to one's own imagination in the frightening world of "what ifs."
Best of luck in your writing!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Oh my goodness -- you are awesome, J'nea!! :) I'm pleased that you could 'imagine' based on this one... a greater compliment to a poet than just the stars! :) ;) ;) Although, let's be honest here: those stars are pretty incredible (wink, wink) -- thank you!! ;) Yvette
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You are quite welcome!
Best Wishes in your Writing!
