Addicted
Can't live without it14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This lost 5-7-5, Addicted, has the proper formatting and notes that some items in our modern world have become appendages which we cannot imagine being without.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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This lost 5-7-5, Addicted, has the proper formatting and notes that some items in our modern world have become appendages which we cannot imagine being without.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Sad but true I'm afraid. I'm old enough to remember corded phones and pay phones. The good old days. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Lost contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation too.
Hugs,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Beautiful entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Lost contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation too.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this great review. I really appreciate it. : )
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I guess one of the things you've brought out here is the same thing Eckhart Tolle would say, that addictions take us out of the present moment. we are always thinking of the future. This is a good topic. I am going to vote for this one.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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I guess one of the things you've brought out here is the same thing Eckhart Tolle would say, that addictions take us out of the present moment. we are always thinking of the future. This is a good topic. I am going to vote for this one.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this great review...you have just made my day. :)
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well-written with a sense of humor. It flows well and your artwork choice enhances your message about your obsession about the lost of your cellphone. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well-written with a sense of humor. It flows well and your artwork choice enhances your message about your obsession about the lost of your cellphone. Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you, your comments are much appreciated. :)
Comment from zanya
Yes this 5-7-5 raises a hearty chuckle - most of us can concur with these sentiments - our cellphone certainly gets our attention - a great visual to illustrate also
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Yes this 5-7-5 raises a hearty chuckle - most of us can concur with these sentiments - our cellphone certainly gets our attention - a great visual to illustrate also
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you, that's so nice of you. :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yeah, this looks about right. In the midst of all of the clutter and chaos, hiding in plain sight is the cell phone. It's attached to the place where it's always at, your ear. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Yeah, this looks about right. In the midst of all of the clutter and chaos, hiding in plain sight is the cell phone. It's attached to the place where it's always at, your ear. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, I have actually done this myself! How tragic is that! You made me smile here, this is a fun write and I reckon it is a winner, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Oh dear, I have actually done this myself! How tragic is that! You made me smile here, this is a fun write and I reckon it is a winner, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Mia Twysted
I know this problem all to well as I am always putting my phone down and asking people to call me so I can locate it. I love the picture you have picked to go along with the piece.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I know this problem all to well as I am always putting my phone down and asking people to call me so I can locate it. I love the picture you have picked to go along with the piece.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Me too! Seriously I'm always losing it, and lately when I've had it on silent. Thanks so much for reading. :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Lost writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Lost writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
I love your 5-7-5! And I love love the picture that goes with it! I really hope you win! You deserve it. I think a lot of people can relate to this. It's too bad we've all become so addicted to our phone. Thanks for sharing this with us!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I love your 5-7-5! And I love love the picture that goes with it! I really hope you win! You deserve it. I think a lot of people can relate to this. It's too bad we've all become so addicted to our phone. Thanks for sharing this with us!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this great review...you are awesome.
