A Silent Cry
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Love Song
by Marjon van Bruggen
Hello, Marjon,
Beautiful and melancholic. Life together seemed a blink of an eye... I imagine he carried the lamp for the both of you when he was alive and now you carry it.... beautiful metaphor. Well done my friend.
"When I�´m dead remember
I loved."
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Love Song
by Marjon van Bruggen
Hello, Marjon,
Beautiful and melancholic. Life together seemed a blink of an eye... I imagine he carried the lamp for the both of you when he was alive and now you carry it.... beautiful metaphor. Well done my friend.
"When I�´m dead remember
I loved."
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thanks a lot, Gypsy! I rectified the I'm. good you saw that!
Comment from country ranch writer
Grandpa used to say it is better to have loved than lost leaving one to live alone. Rember the good things of ones relationship. Some
Loves are not lastingor meant to be.
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Grandpa used to say it is better to have loved than lost leaving one to live alone. Rember the good things of ones relationship. Some
Loves are not lastingor meant to be.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the review, so appreciated!
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Comment from elchupakabra
When I�´m dead remember - a slip of the finger perhaps?
Except for that one strange character typo, I thought this was a good piece. Nice work on this and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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When I�´m dead remember - a slip of the finger perhaps?
Except for that one strange character typo, I thought this was a good piece. Nice work on this and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thanks, I'll check on the scramble and rectify. The review is appreciated!
Comment from royowen
A beautifully melancholy work. It's amazing how much we can enjoy the sentimentality of the love process, I've told people that God is not sentimental, I wonder if He'll forget those that have been lost, I think it's a human frailty. One of the differences between us. Beautifully written Marjon, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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A beautifully melancholy work. It's amazing how much we can enjoy the sentimentality of the love process, I've told people that God is not sentimental, I wonder if He'll forget those that have been lost, I think it's a human frailty. One of the differences between us. Beautifully written Marjon, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thanks, Roy. Your review is, as always, so appreciated.
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Well done
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smile, bless you.
