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Delicatessen

Someone hungry behind a delicatessen

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Wow what a monorhyme poem for the rhyming contest and you did it so very uniquely. Loved the repeatition and the short lines for dramatic effect. This is a unique piece and a fun one

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020

Comment from papa55mike
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The food tree is always open to varied species. I love the way you rhymed every line. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020