Night Life
Live for the now40 total reviews
Comment from Ben1
This was a very romantic and passionate poem that reminds me of my own wife. You poem says a lot about the emotion we all feel. And that during that time all that maters is love. I also think the picture you put with it was made for this poem.
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This was a very romantic and passionate poem that reminds me of my own wife. You poem says a lot about the emotion we all feel. And that during that time all that maters is love. I also think the picture you put with it was made for this poem.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I liked how you put this together. You conveyed well the feeling of love people have for each other in this piece. I thought your writing flowed well. Good luck in the contest!
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I liked how you put this together. You conveyed well the feeling of love people have for each other in this piece. I thought your writing flowed well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from gramalot8
Thank you for your very well written Tanks. You definitely bring a vision of romance and love into your readers mind.
I hope you do well in the contest.
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Thank you for your very well written Tanks. You definitely bring a vision of romance and love into your readers mind.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Therese Caron
Excellent poem depicting the joy of true passion. Maybe it has sexual content, but the picture is still striking and really complements your words. Beautiful job.Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent poem depicting the joy of true passion. Maybe it has sexual content, but the picture is still striking and really complements your words. Beautiful job.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from TPAC
A smooth conveyance with words carefully capturing the ecstasy of a special moment, touching sentiments warming to heart. All stated in my given opinion.
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A smooth conveyance with words carefully capturing the ecstasy of a special moment, touching sentiments warming to heart. All stated in my given opinion.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Lancellot, this is a well written tanka, true to form and the subject is treated tastefully. The sex warning was hardly necessary, but I suppose some might find it so. 'Live for the now' - I agree. Well done and Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
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Hello Lancellot, this is a well written tanka, true to form and the subject is treated tastefully. The sex warning was hardly necessary, but I suppose some might find it so. 'Live for the now' - I agree. Well done and Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from write hand blue
A sensual picture sets the scene. Memories of a previous life. Life should be lived to the fullest we only get one go at it. You describe the elements of this philosophy in so few words. I like the red colouration which sets the mood. Great work. ~Mel~
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A sensual picture sets the scene. Memories of a previous life. Life should be lived to the fullest we only get one go at it. You describe the elements of this philosophy in so few words. I like the red colouration which sets the mood. Great work. ~Mel~
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Urial
Hi Lancellot,
Charming poem Tanka. The photo defines those were the days! The words you use picture that true love never lets go!
Peace be with you,
Urial
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Hi Lancellot,
Charming poem Tanka. The photo defines those were the days! The words you use picture that true love never lets go!
Peace be with you,
Urial
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the scene to life alright, this is a sensual and passionate write filled with intimacy and your thoughts must have wondered to your youth here, a sweet and wholesome connection as two lovers are far from social distancing here, he he he, much enjoyed, Dolly x
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You brought the scene to life alright, this is a sensual and passionate write filled with intimacy and your thoughts must have wondered to your youth here, a sweet and wholesome connection as two lovers are far from social distancing here, he he he, much enjoyed, Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much. I don't think Covid comes into the mind of lovers. Nature is very powerful.
Comment from Spitfire
Okay, you'll have to read mine on this subject. Passion is vital to romance, not necessarily to bliss in my tanka. It's paradoxical that both joy and pain intermingle.
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Okay, you'll have to read mine on this subject. Passion is vital to romance, not necessarily to bliss in my tanka. It's paradoxical that both joy and pain intermingle.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
