Hopeful Blessing
1-6-1 Sending you good wishes18 total reviews
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the one/six/one contest. Your lovely illustration, of course, pairs perfectly. Good luck in the contest. Very nicely done.
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This is an excellent entry for the one/six/one contest. Your lovely illustration, of course, pairs perfectly. Good luck in the contest. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from elchupakabra
It's my day off today so it is definitely a happy day for me :) This was a nice little piece and I like that it allows for openness in spirituality. Good work and thank you for sharing. Later daze.
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It's my day off today so it is definitely a happy day for me :) This was a nice little piece and I like that it allows for openness in spirituality. Good work and thank you for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I hope you are enjoying your happy day off!
Thanks for your review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem has a spiritual message and fits the meter required by the writing prompt. It is upbeat and optimistic. The picture works well to complement the words.
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This poem has a spiritual message and fits the meter required by the writing prompt. It is upbeat and optimistic. The picture works well to complement the words.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your nice review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poemail about having a happy day will help when we take time to pray then our day will become more organised and that can bring happiness as well
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poemail about having a happy day will help when we take time to pray then our day will become more organised and that can bring happiness as well
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you. A prayer to begin the day is always a good start.
Comment from rama devi
Sweet. Simple. Sincere. I wish you a happen day too. Fine entry. Perfect punctuation choices. Fine presentaiton. Good luck in the contest.
Warmly,
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Sweet. Simple. Sincere. I wish you a happen day too. Fine entry. Perfect punctuation choices. Fine presentaiton. Good luck in the contest.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your complimentary review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was such an uplifting poem! It rose my spirits. I liked the jolly artistic presentation and photo, the spirituality of it - and you even managed to insert rhymes in a poem this short! Great job, I wish I had a six.
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That was such an uplifting poem! It rose my spirits. I liked the jolly artistic presentation and photo, the spirituality of it - and you even managed to insert rhymes in a poem this short! Great job, I wish I had a six.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for such an enthusiastic review.
Comment from The Death
It's a nice poem spreading the message of hope. The rhyming doesn't sound forced at all. Nice presentation which matches your words well. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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It's a nice poem spreading the message of hope. The rhyming doesn't sound forced at all. Nice presentation which matches your words well. Good luck!
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Not only a greeting but a very important reminder -- wonderful offering for this limited format contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Not only a greeting but a very important reminder -- wonderful offering for this limited format contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
