Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a chapter. It was suspenseful at the beginning and so beautiful, warm, heartfelt at the end. I'm just glad that everything turned out alright. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

I'm like you... I like the fairytale ending to a story. I even like to turn the bad guys over to the good side. Why not, right? All writers get to play God with their characters, so we can make them do whatever we want. :)

Thanks for taking the time to read my chapters. I appreciate you!

Stay safe & have a great weekend!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Great pictures. Love how they illustrate your story. This one, for me, was full of raw emotion. It had sadness and joy, with a touch of mystery, as the Furies fate, all rolled up into one. A very nice job.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I always enjoy reading what you leave for a review. It gives me so much encouragement to know you approve and you enjoyed. I do love the fairy tale ending to a story, so why not make the bad guys turn to the good side.
Next week, I will show my new cover for Sins of Chaos. Since I'm revising it, why not redo the cover. It will show readers what the Fury look like. :)
Thanks again and have a great weekend!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Another action packed chapter, Ms Shana! Great artwork too!
Looks like the fury were no match for the battle Angels. Your scene description was spot on. I could imagine all the action in my head as I read along. Great imagery!

Nate

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thanks Nate :)
So glad you enjoyed another Breedline adventure. I was so happy I found the pictures. I was hoping you would approve. Stay tuned my friend.

Stay safe & thanks again,
Shana :)

Comment from elchupakabra

Excellent

First off, really like the artwork that you've chosen at the beginning here. It is not really my kind of read normally, I'm not that into fantasy if I'm being honest, more of a crime thriller/murder mystery buff, but I digress. The chapter itself is well written and I enjoyed it regardless of how I feel about the genre. Thank you for sharing, later daze.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thanks so much! :)

Glad you liked the artwork. I was hoping it would be eye catching. I like thriller mysteries myself. I'm glad I could take you to the fantasy side and entertain you. I do like the supernatural with romance, so this is my kind of stuff I like to create. It's fun to step into the pretend world for a while.

Hope to hear from you again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Bhakti Balanse

Good

I found this chapter very interesting and. I m actually waiting for the next part. I will definitely read the next one. I am a beginner and I wish I could write like one day.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thank you, Bhakti :)

I'm thrilled to entertain with my Breedline adventures. Glad you enjoyed and hope to hear from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Jeffrey Ford

Excellent

I think you wrote beautifully written and great chapter. You're description of the scenes and character interactions were really good. I enjoyed the Cronus character and his powers.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thank you, Jeffrey :)

It's my birthday and your review made it complete! Cronus is one of my new favorites too! All my battle angels are fun to write about. Thanks for giving my story a chance.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I love the way you handled the supernatural behaviour of the battle angels, causing them to be human in their feelings, so that they will be understood by their human reader. And I likewise enjoyed the God of the universe is forgiving and sees the potential in a creature not the bad. And that's exactly how He deals, He looks at the potential not the sin, because He dealt with the sin, well done Dear girl, blessings, Roy
Typo : And his form envelop(e) 2: Manuel leaned over (the) stair railing.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020

Thank you, dear friend :)

Glad you enjoyed the battle angels. They are so fun to write about. I believe they came in at the nick of time to save humanity and the Breedline.
Thanks for catching my typos too! :)

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 29-Jul-2020

I agree