Wisdom
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Iza.
You handled the subject of words very well. There are words we constantly use, and you compared that to God's word. His words seems to be more reliable than ours most of the time.
This is like a prayer. This is good writing with a wonderful thought.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Hello Iza.
You handled the subject of words very well. There are words we constantly use, and you compared that to God's word. His words seems to be more reliable than ours most of the time.
This is like a prayer. This is good writing with a wonderful thought.
Robert
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much Mr. Robert, is so nice to hear from you again:)
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-word story, Divine Inspiration, has the proper word count and brings the book of Genesis up so we can hear God's commanding life to begin. Soon, we'll hear of its end.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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This seventy-word story, Divine Inspiration, has the proper word count and brings the book of Genesis up so we can hear God's commanding life to begin. Soon, we'll hear of its end.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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I hope not to soon
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image and story, Iza.
-I like your opening paragraph
about what words can do.
-Good quote in the second
one to show the impact of it.
-A good conclusion, too.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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-A good image and story, Iza.
-I like your opening paragraph
about what words can do.
-Good quote in the second
one to show the impact of it.
-A good conclusion, too.
-Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much Pam:)
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You are welcome, Iza.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful testimony in the form of a 70-Flash offering here -- well done and well-presented! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Such a wonderful testimony in the form of a 70-Flash offering here -- well done and well-presented! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your good wishes, unfortunately I was disqualified. The motif my text was not a story... go figure
Comment from write hand blue
Words that mean something to the writer. They shape all our lives in their content and context. I follow that, and find the writing good up to the final three sentences where it goes off the rails (my opinion).
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Words that mean something to the writer. They shape all our lives in their content and context. I follow that, and find the writing good up to the final three sentences where it goes off the rails (my opinion).
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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You are so right thank you so much for your wonderful comments. Have a blessed day.
Comment from oliver818
This is a good entry for this competition. I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a clear and easy to follow message. Best of luck with the competition and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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This is a good entry for this competition. I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a clear and easy to follow message. Best of luck with the competition and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much.
