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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Sad to think the crying continues with no let up, over and over. But then again, we dont really know do we? My boys loved apple pie with a slice of melted cheese on

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Lucky boys!
    Ricky
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I feel a reaching in this piece. Clawing and hoping to get a response to see a flicker of something that says they are there for you and they car. However, it seemed out of since and I couldn'[t find a melody, if you will, to the poem.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Yup.