Wisdom
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. We only have today, yesterday is the past and cannot return to give us any pleasure and tomorrow we may not see and then we missed our chance we had today.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. We only have today, yesterday is the past and cannot return to give us any pleasure and tomorrow we may not see and then we missed our chance we had today.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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You are so right Ms. Sandra, and all we can do is to reflect on that.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Amen, Sister Iza!! ;) :) A wonderful offering beautiful bird of flight!! ;) Yvette
as is the last --> as it is the last
Since we live in doomsday --> We live in doomsday
province and I am --> province, and I am
balcony, I am --> balcony. I am
I sneak out --> I snuck out
house, you know Coronella --> house: you know, Coronella
Well we went close to home, one --> Well, we went close to home: one
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Amen, Sister Iza!! ;) :) A wonderful offering beautiful bird of flight!! ;) Yvette
as is the last --> as it is the last
Since we live in doomsday --> We live in doomsday
province and I am --> province, and I am
balcony, I am --> balcony. I am
I sneak out --> I snuck out
house, you know Coronella --> house: you know, Coronella
Well we went close to home, one --> Well, we went close to home: one
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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As usual your comments are graciously appreciated and the corrections done as per your suggestions:) I hope you have a lovely summer and some cool water to swim bye.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a very profound story that you penned here. The picture accompanying this story is absolutely perfect and elegant. The writing itself is flawless and we didn't notice any grammatical errors or any typos. Have a wonderful night.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is a very profound story that you penned here. The picture accompanying this story is absolutely perfect and elegant. The writing itself is flawless and we didn't notice any grammatical errors or any typos. Have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Bobby and please forgive me for my delay.
Comment from DeboraDyess
Great advice!
Live every day as is the last one. >> Live every day as if it is the last one.
I am not a canary. >> What a great line
And then this not-a-canary went to Pigeon lake! Love the connection there, even if it wasn't intentional!
Somehow we manage to keep >> Somehow, we manage to keep
Ya' know, though, if hubby reads yur FS posts, your found out! lol
What a beautiful place, Iza! If you have to be stuck, at least you're stuck some place like that!
Be blessed,
Deb
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Great advice!
Live every day as is the last one. >> Live every day as if it is the last one.
I am not a canary. >> What a great line
And then this not-a-canary went to Pigeon lake! Love the connection there, even if it wasn't intentional!
Somehow we manage to keep >> Somehow, we manage to keep
Ya' know, though, if hubby reads yur FS posts, your found out! lol
What a beautiful place, Iza! If you have to be stuck, at least you're stuck some place like that!
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hi Deb, thank you so much for the great feedback, and no worries, my husband have not read any of my published books in Romania, so FS will not ever get on his radar.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(wreck our brains s/b rack; I sneak out and told a white lie to my husband s/b I sneaked out after telling a white lie to my husband; found us a parking space (OMIT: for our car and for us) Wry humor and apt point--my sentiments exactly! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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(wreck our brains s/b rack; I sneak out and told a white lie to my husband s/b I sneaked out after telling a white lie to my husband; found us a parking space (OMIT: for our car and for us) Wry humor and apt point--my sentiments exactly! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hi Liz, thank you so much for reading and correcting my mistakes.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I really liked this one, especially the moral. Just a little point, try to think tense agreements...
Here, dad will be proud should be dad would be proud (to agree with the past following, but also use the conditional)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I really liked this one, especially the moral. Just a little point, try to think tense agreements...
Here, dad will be proud should be dad would be proud (to agree with the past following, but also use the conditional)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hi Katherine thank you so much for your great review and the grammatical corrections and please forgive me for my delay in answering your feedback.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the message this piece is sending out. Take care of your day and live, which will lend you surprises throughout the rest of your life. We were not put here to fade away.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I like the message this piece is sending out. Take care of your day and live, which will lend you surprises throughout the rest of your life. We were not put here to fade away.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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So true my dear friend.
