Lady Hope
She springs eternal12 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
This is a lovely poem! I'm a strong fan of hope. Positivity is definitely in short supply, but born from hope, there's still some out there. I loved the illustration too, nice colors, great depiction of the spirt of hope. Good job. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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This is a lovely poem! I'm a strong fan of hope. Positivity is definitely in short supply, but born from hope, there's still some out there. I loved the illustration too, nice colors, great depiction of the spirt of hope. Good job. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you, you're very kind.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem writing prompt contest.
You developed hope's personality well.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem writing prompt contest.
You developed hope's personality well.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem.:)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have used many literary techniques and figures of speech. You have used strong metaphors. You have some good uses of juxtaposition. This becomes universal. Many readers will be invited to reflect upon who their companions are when they miss the sight of Lady Hope. Thiscould serve as a cautionary tale. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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You have used many literary techniques and figures of speech. You have used strong metaphors. You have some good uses of juxtaposition. This becomes universal. Many readers will be invited to reflect upon who their companions are when they miss the sight of Lady Hope. Thiscould serve as a cautionary tale. Well thought out.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful words and great review...I appreciate it. :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the Personification of an Emotion poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you, that's very nice of you. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hope, I like how you personify it and gives it freely to the people in need. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.ð???ð???
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Hope, I like how you personify it and gives it freely to the people in need. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.ð???ð???
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your best wishes and great review. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Bravo! This poem is the personification of hope! Something we could all use a lot more of nowadays. So much hate and fear in the world right now. So much sadness. This poem is uplifting and gives us a bit of what we all need. Which is hope.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Bravo! This poem is the personification of hope! Something we could all use a lot more of nowadays. So much hate and fear in the world right now. So much sadness. This poem is uplifting and gives us a bit of what we all need. Which is hope.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you for those sick shining stars..
Comment from The Death
You have used the personification nicely to capture how hope is eternal and always working to heal those in grief. You have included different aspects related to it. I also liked the social commentary you included in the third stanza. Excellent rhyming and fine flow. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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You have used the personification nicely to capture how hope is eternal and always working to heal those in grief. You have included different aspects related to it. I also liked the social commentary you included in the third stanza. Excellent rhyming and fine flow. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Without hope there is utter despair, and I enjoyed your journey with hope at your side here, those who are hopeless need some spiritual hope, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Without hope there is utter despair, and I enjoyed your journey with hope at your side here, those who are hopeless need some spiritual hope, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and for taking time to read my poem.
Comment from pome lover
great choice for this contest. Hope is certainly in our hearts and minds, trying to edge out anger and disgust - speaking for myself. And we do need to keep hoping and praying for this country.
Good thoughts, good rhymes, good poem!
And of course, good entry.
pome lover
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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great choice for this contest. Hope is certainly in our hearts and minds, trying to edge out anger and disgust - speaking for myself. And we do need to keep hoping and praying for this country.
Good thoughts, good rhymes, good poem!
And of course, good entry.
pome lover
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from LisaMay
How very true:
I distribute what's needed most,
not something you can buy.
A feeling that all people want,
sadly, in short supply.
Your poem speaks of hope's attributes really well. I love the uplifting sense in the last stanza.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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How very true:
I distribute what's needed most,
not something you can buy.
A feeling that all people want,
sadly, in short supply.
Your poem speaks of hope's attributes really well. I love the uplifting sense in the last stanza.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind words and great review. :)
