Sad
No one to catch me15 total reviews
Comment from palmart
Great point of view! Personalize things is a great resource that direct minds to considerations not even thought before. Additionally, adding an emotion "sad" vivifies a sensation, making more human the view!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Great point of view! Personalize things is a great resource that direct minds to considerations not even thought before. Additionally, adding an emotion "sad" vivifies a sensation, making more human the view!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.
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My pleasure!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your one-liner is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Your one-liner is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Good use of baseball puns in your one-line poem. It's always amazing how many foul balls there are in a single game. Those pitches must be so hard to hit. And homers even more impossible. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Good use of baseball puns in your one-line poem. It's always amazing how many foul balls there are in a single game. Those pitches must be so hard to hit. And homers even more impossible. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I played baseball in high school. You are so right, pitches are had to hit. Thanks for read and review.
Comment from UpNorth
I don't know much about baseball, but the picture caught my attention. It did look lonely. A foul ball is up for grabs-and the stands are empty. Thinking deeper, I thought about the foul ball of politics in the midst of COVID- and a seeming lack of people in power to pick up this pandemic that is wildly off course to get better.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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I don't know much about baseball, but the picture caught my attention. It did look lonely. A foul ball is up for grabs-and the stands are empty. Thinking deeper, I thought about the foul ball of politics in the midst of COVID- and a seeming lack of people in power to pick up this pandemic that is wildly off course to get better.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for the read and the comments. I agree with you about politics and like your slant.
Comment from harmony13
This one line poem is very sweet. The author was able trigger an
emotion with this foul ball. The artwork is perfect and compliments
the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This one line poem is very sweet. The author was able trigger an
emotion with this foul ball. The artwork is perfect and compliments
the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for read, review and comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Sad, uses twelve words and imagines the mourning souvenir ball which must wait until a season with spectators arrives.
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This one-line poem, Sad, uses twelve words and imagines the mourning souvenir ball which must wait until a season with spectators arrives.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This guy is lost, will probably get pounded around as a batting practice ball instead of being displayed on someone's shelf. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
No one to catch me
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Hello my friend
Your one line poem is very clever. It's hard to write a one liner...you did a great job. Good luck in the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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No one to catch me
Sad
Hello my friend
Your one line poem is very clever. It's hard to write a one liner...you did a great job. Good luck in the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks for the read, review and encouraging words.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem about the ball tossed aside because he was called a foul and no one care you take him home but everyone fightshould over the winning ball.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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A very well-written one-line poem about the ball tossed aside because he was called a foul and no one care you take him home but everyone fightshould over the winning ball.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Unfortunate, no fights under the present Covid-19 circumstance. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, it sounds like this ball is about to find a home and be back in the game, a poignant write and I enjoyed the humour here, inventive and enjoyable, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Ha ha ha, it sounds like this ball is about to find a home and be back in the game, a poignant write and I enjoyed the humour here, inventive and enjoyable, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thanks much for the read and review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I feel bad for the ball. My son says I should stop giving life to inanimate objects. The picture is perfect for the piece as it add that extra eye catching image to drive it home.
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I feel bad for the ball. My son says I should stop giving life to inanimate objects. The picture is perfect for the piece as it add that extra eye catching image to drive it home.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the read, review and encouraging comments.
