An Evening in Paris
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "An evening in Paris chapter 4"A man finds a new life after losing a dear friend
3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, that did not go well. I guess she was not that woman, Inge? Did he give information that he should not have given to the wrong person? I guess you'll reveal it in the next chapter.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Oh, that did not go well. I guess she was not that woman, Inge? Did he give information that he should not have given to the wrong person? I guess you'll reveal it in the next chapter.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Dear Helen, Yes all will be revealed in subsequent chapters. I am really enjoying having someone read this through from start to finish. It is a new experience for me as a writer. I hope you find it as enjoyable as I do. The next chapter(s) move fairly swiftly, so you won't have to wait long to discover who does what. Thanks for reading my work dear Helen, it means a lot to me. cheers Cass
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The wrong person or what? Poor Pierre how long he supposed to wait for that mirrage girl? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter and with your writings.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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The wrong person or what? Poor Pierre how long he supposed to wait for that mirrage girl? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter and with your writings.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Dear Iza, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Patience my dear, patience. It all adds to the suspense. You will find chapter five very interesting. Keep reading, the story has been completely written so you won't be left "up in the air" with an unfinished tale. cheers Cass
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
Wow!!! What an excellent piece of work!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!! Just one thing, maybe you could divide it into paragraphs? It would be much easier to read! Thanks sooo much for sharing!!!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Dear author,
Wow!!! What an excellent piece of work!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!! Just one thing, maybe you could divide it into paragraphs? It would be much easier to read! Thanks sooo much for sharing!!!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Dear Anne- Marie, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Your
words bring me much encouragement and I am truly thankful. I hope you will continue to read this story until it is complete.I have changed the layout as you suggested and it does look better with more "air" between the lines of text. cheers Cass
