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Unlearned Lessons

5-7-5 poem

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Comment from lyenochka
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Amen!! That is the most distressing thing for me - witnessing believers honoring their party politics over the Lord. Our allegiance is to Him and our call is to love one another. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

Comment from Monica Chaddick
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Beautiful and sad art work that you have selected to go with your poem. The poem likewise is wonderful, but sad. Unfortunately, you speak the truth. Politics now rule our world instead of Him, and that is why there are so many problems. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020

Comment from Anne-Marie brison
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Dear author,






Wow!!!!!! What an excellent piece of work!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!!! Awesome job!!!! Keep writing!!!!!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020

Comment from bob cullen
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To me, line one tells the absolute truth. Whereas lines two and three tell of mankind's unwillingness to learn from past mistakes. Of all the three liners I've read on Fanstory ever, I think this one is the best. Let's hope we take this one to heart.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020