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Political Animals Fighting

5-7-5 political contest entry

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet.. I gave you your first vote.

I found your entry an accurate presentation of politicians ..

I was looking forward to seeingTrump deposed but then an American friend filled me in on Biden's background .. wouldn't be surprised if he turned out to be involved in that pedo scandal ..

...voters will be asked to vote between these two .... .....

Donald Trump has still many supporters : this reality has me scratching my head ...at the beginning of the covid emergency in America Trump said .. it will go away .. one day we will wake up and it will be gone ( sounded like a 12 year old)

Nearly 5 months later and with more than 140.000 deaths , he is still saying the same nonsensical phrase.

Up to two weeks ago he refused to put on a mask . Shouldn't the President of America give the good example...

To think our lives are in the hand of an idiot makes me shudder.



 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    yes, there is an overweight ass leading us into more trouble with his lack of science education and empathy

    sadly, Electoral Coliege voters decided in his favor in 2016 - methinks this will not happen again in 2020

    it will be interesting to see if the private school his son Barron actually opens or not - even with no kids in this private school, Trump can't threaten to withdraw (state) funding for his son's school education (-;
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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I love it!!! Wish I had six stars left to give you. A bunch of asses run our lives - just the truth of it. Loved the art work, as well. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
    Thanks Monica for what I believe is your first review of my typical 5-7-5 style. Sadly, those asses lead our country.

    Please check me out after the contest. My 5-7-5s are often quirky and eclectic. I call them 'observational Haiku.' (-;
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, yeah, I do believe you've struck the correct tone here - too bad it's the common folks out here that are stuck in the wake of their nonsense... :( Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Yvette,

    If it was not my bugaboo to insist on my 5-7-5 syllable count, the last line should be ?Who gives us the most gas?!? You right about their nonsense.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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I loved this. Oh, it was so cool! "Who is the biggest ass" indeed? We can name a few (lol). A wonderful rendition of the contest, a superb picture, this may be a winner, good luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Hi ET!

    My strict 5-7-5 syllable contest entry did not allow my last line to correctly read: ?Who gives us the most gas!?!? Thanks for, hopefully, your vote if you haven?t entered the same (-;
Comment from mauial
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Very truthful as to what they are. Great picture to go with the poem. As to the question in the last line, I believe the best liar is the biggest ass. In reality as far as IÊ»m concerned they are all assesð???

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thanks for your confidence in the voting. ?Liar, liar, your pants are on fire!? is true for our politicians. Truthfully, some are bigger asses than others (-;

    My strict 5-7-5 syllable contest entry did not allow my last line to correctly read: ?Who gives us the most gas!?!? Thanks for, hopefully, your vote if you haven?t entered the same (-;