State of the Union
Silence is not golden yet it feels safe... for now25 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written political 5-7-5 poem. When free speech is only allowed for one group and the other us not allowed to say anything there is definitely something huge wrong.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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A very well-written political 5-7-5 poem. When free speech is only allowed for one group and the other us not allowed to say anything there is definitely something huge wrong.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Amen, sister! Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are true, descriptive, interesting and creative.
Silence does feel safe. I pondered on the theme of this poem.
The author's words are strong yet need to be said. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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The author's words are true, descriptive, interesting and creative.
Silence does feel safe. I pondered on the theme of this poem.
The author's words are strong yet need to be said. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from amada
This is a very short and concise haiku style poem based on politics and fear. Sometimes that is hanging in our country these days. Your lines are short, but the meaning is large. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a very short and concise haiku style poem based on politics and fear. Sometimes that is hanging in our country these days. Your lines are short, but the meaning is large. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for your review!
Comment from mauial
Good poem and the art is a good choice. To me man has been forever imprisoned by political whims. Hereʻs a Biblical truth : Man has dominated man to his harm . ( Ecclesiastes 8:9) Caʻt deny that
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Good poem and the art is a good choice. To me man has been forever imprisoned by political whims. Hereʻs a Biblical truth : Man has dominated man to his harm . ( Ecclesiastes 8:9) Caʻt deny that
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for your review!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Where is the freedom and have you done with it? I think that this is the subtle allusion to it in this poem? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Where is the freedom and have you done with it? I think that this is the subtle allusion to it in this poem? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for your review!
