With Uncertainty
Never knowing the outcome.......15 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This sounds like a prayer someone would say on their knees at the side of the bed. It helps me as I am going through a troubled time right now and need all the prayers I can get so I said it out loud and in my head hoping beyond hope that the heavens above hear me.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This sounds like a prayer someone would say on their knees at the side of the bed. It helps me as I am going through a troubled time right now and need all the prayers I can get so I said it out loud and in my head hoping beyond hope that the heavens above hear me.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your beautiful
comments. I will pray that God hears your prayer.....Maria
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Well said. You've touched on something we all face on many different levels. Waiting for someone to return, a test result, an answer to multiple questions life throws at us. I appreciate you going to the source of the answers, prayer in a loving, caring God. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Well said. You've touched on something we all face on many different levels. Waiting for someone to return, a test result, an answer to multiple questions life throws at us. I appreciate you going to the source of the answers, prayer in a loving, caring God. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind, meaningful comments. Have a great weekend!.....Maria
Comment from Eternal Muse
An adorable picture. I like the idea of a poem written from the POV of a dog. So pleading and descriptive. So moving. Especially the last line.
This should do very well in the contest, I wish you luck in the booths!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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An adorable picture. I like the idea of a poem written from the POV of a dog. So pleading and descriptive. So moving. Especially the last line.
This should do very well in the contest, I wish you luck in the booths!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your lovely
comments. I loved the picture of the dog too!
Have a great weekend!.....Maria
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a nice piece, though it is definitely tugging on the heartstrings. Great work on this Tanka, I know they're challenging as I tried one myself. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Later daze.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is a nice piece, though it is definitely tugging on the heartstrings. Great work on this Tanka, I know they're challenging as I tried one myself. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Later daze.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and you great
comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is a respectable entry for the Tanka contest. The message is a sincere, almost deperate plea for answers from God. The reader is not sure of the questions. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This poem is a respectable entry for the Tanka contest. The message is a sincere, almost deperate plea for answers from God. The reader is not sure of the questions. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and you great
comments. As far as the questions, I have too many to state.
I am leaving them with God. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from papa55mike
When those answers don't fit, God can make them. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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When those answers don't fit, God can make them. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and you great
comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
This is a perfectly written entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest, and the picture you chose would simply melt the heart of anyone with a soul!
Thank you for sharing this piece.
Hope is my saving grace and it is wonderful to be reminded that many others are relying on it as well.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This is a perfectly written entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest, and the picture you chose would simply melt the heart of anyone with a soul!
Thank you for sharing this piece.
Hope is my saving grace and it is wonderful to be reminded that many others are relying on it as well.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
With Uncertainty
by harmony13
Hello, Harmony,
Beautiful Tanka with classic syllable count. Good connection between lines. It's a little sad. Not getting answers to your prayers Tanka doesn't usually rhyme...unless it happens naturally. Good entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest. Good luck, honey.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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With Uncertainty
by harmony13
Hello, Harmony,
Beautiful Tanka with classic syllable count. Good connection between lines. It's a little sad. Not getting answers to your prayers Tanka doesn't usually rhyme...unless it happens naturally. Good entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest. Good luck, honey.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
comments. Have a great day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our questions are often left unanswered and I have so many to ask but realise that there will be no answers, so I am content not to ask them, we are sometimes left in ignorance and can only surmise and make judgements based on what we know, a conundrum here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Our questions are often left unanswered and I have so many to ask but realise that there will be no answers, so I am content not to ask them, we are sometimes left in ignorance and can only surmise and make judgements based on what we know, a conundrum here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your interesting
comments. Have a great day!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello harmony13
your tanka
With Uncertainty is great with the picture of a cute dog cuddled in a blanket he does look uncertain not knowing what is coming. Good line--
and never knowing the outcome.......
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Hello harmony13
your tanka
With Uncertainty is great with the picture of a cute dog cuddled in a blanket he does look uncertain not knowing what is coming. Good line--
and never knowing the outcome.......
Gert
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
comments. Have a great day!
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Good day to you harmony
You are welcome.
Gert
