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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't know what Mac's problem is, if I had all those men wanting to look after me, I'd not object!!! LOL. I hope things are healing up properly, and that she'll soon be safe. Well we want them all safe from those monsters. Well done, Barbara, another great chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I don't know what Mac's problem is, if I had all those men wanting to look after me, I'd not object!!! LOL. I hope things are healing up properly, and that she'll soon be safe. Well we want them all safe from those monsters. Well done, Barbara, another great chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
McKenzie is very anxious to get out but she sounds like there might still be further problems. I know she is getting good care with all those men guarding . This case will soon be solved and I miss it. I have you have your next in mind.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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McKenzie is very anxious to get out but she sounds like there might still be further problems. I know she is getting good care with all those men guarding . This case will soon be solved and I miss it. I have you have your next in mind.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Reword the intro re searching for his sister's murderer...doesn't think anyone would harm her (!)... Dialog is well-rendered--sounds natural; story holds interest. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Reword the intro re searching for his sister's murderer...doesn't think anyone would harm her (!)... Dialog is well-rendered--sounds natural; story holds interest. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll check that area.
Comment from royowen
So, after much quizzing by the doctor, who has ordered an MRI scan, because of fractures to her rib cage, and possibly the same to her cheek as well. The boys were sleeping, but she's as feisty as ever, but she'll be confined for at least another day. Beautifully written and very exciting Barbara. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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So, after much quizzing by the doctor, who has ordered an MRI scan, because of fractures to her rib cage, and possibly the same to her cheek as well. The boys were sleeping, but she's as feisty as ever, but she'll be confined for at least another day. Beautifully written and very exciting Barbara. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello to your Barb (barbara.wilkey author of St. Louis Chapter 33 part 1. Is well written, but you left me into awe when the five men that were watching over
McKenzie and left me hanging, knowing that she is all alone is scary.
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Hello to your Barb (barbara.wilkey author of St. Louis Chapter 33 part 1. Is well written, but you left me into awe when the five men that were watching over
McKenzie and left me hanging, knowing that she is all alone is scary.
Gert
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Barb (barbara.wilkey)
You are welcome.
Gert
Comment from Sankey
Glad to be back on board with your great storytelling. ALways works on my patience waiting for the end of another week. Good read and glad Mac is awake. One little change needed. No spags as such. New line and (")You got stuck watching me?"
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Glad to be back on board with your great storytelling. ALways works on my patience waiting for the end of another week. Good read and glad Mac is awake. One little change needed. No spags as such. New line and (")You got stuck watching me?"
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the catch and I will fix it ASAP!!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I could give you six stars on everything you write, but more times than not, I never have one by the time I read your chapters. Thankfully, I'm happy to have one today. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Well, I could give you six stars on everything you write, but more times than not, I never have one by the time I read your chapters. Thankfully, I'm happy to have one today. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement. You're sweet.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This story just gets better and better with each post. McKenzie is coming alive, Logan has settled on her, and the rest of the boys are keeping special watch on her. Well done.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This story just gets better and better with each post. McKenzie is coming alive, Logan has settled on her, and the rest of the boys are keeping special watch on her. Well done.
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ulla
Well, so McKenzie doesn't have a lot of choice, does she? Five guys looking out for and a doctor who is conscientious of his work. I like this story, Barbara, and looking forward to what's next. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Well, so McKenzie doesn't have a lot of choice, does she? Five guys looking out for and a doctor who is conscientious of his work. I like this story, Barbara, and looking forward to what's next. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Oh, dear! It sounds as if Mac isn't out of the woods yet. She's fortunate to have those guys watching over her, or she'd probably risk getting hurt again if she tries to leave the hospital too soon. Interesting information about Trey's artificial leg and that Logan saved his life. The war buddies stick together. Bad news about Edger, but it looks like he's going to recover. Eager to learn who done it. Another great chapter. judi
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Oh, dear! It sounds as if Mac isn't out of the woods yet. She's fortunate to have those guys watching over her, or she'd probably risk getting hurt again if she tries to leave the hospital too soon. Interesting information about Trey's artificial leg and that Logan saved his life. The war buddies stick together. Bad news about Edger, but it looks like he's going to recover. Eager to learn who done it. Another great chapter. judi
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. Answers coming very soon.
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I can hardly wait! judi
