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Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "St. Louis Chapter 33 part 1"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from lancellot
This hospital scene is sweet. They all seem to good, nearly perfect people. hmm, sometimes that gives pause. But, it is in keeping with the story so far. I suspect McKenzie should be leaving the hospital soon as she doesn't appear to be in any danger from her injuries or the alcohol poisoning.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This hospital scene is sweet. They all seem to good, nearly perfect people. hmm, sometimes that gives pause. But, it is in keeping with the story so far. I suspect McKenzie should be leaving the hospital soon as she doesn't appear to be in any danger from her injuries or the alcohol poisoning.
Well done.
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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McKenzie will leave the hospital soon, and the bad guys will be revealed, but will Mac and Logan see happily ever after??? Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
She is that. Spitfire. So the old boy lost a leg from a boom- boom. Yep, he's lucky to be on the planet.
I see love is like a mushroom cloud not comes the fall out.
Good one Barb.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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She is that. Spitfire. So the old boy lost a leg from a boom- boom. Yep, he's lucky to be on the planet.
I see love is like a mushroom cloud not comes the fall out.
Good one Barb.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Somewhere in the distance I hear wedding bells.
