Some Summer Fun
3-5-7 Don't look now!15 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
awesome that you can still enjoy a summer of normalcy and there is not to much rain to spoil the fun :``Belly laughs
with all my fat friends
when we go skinny dipping.
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awesome that you can still enjoy a summer of normalcy and there is not to much rain to spoil the fun :``Belly laughs
with all my fat friends
when we go skinny dipping.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
Comment from Phillip Smeal
Belly laughs reading about skinny dipping with fat friends. Just so nice an affirmation. The rounder you are the more skin to dip, so you probably should do it more often.
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Belly laughs reading about skinny dipping with fat friends. Just so nice an affirmation. The rounder you are the more skin to dip, so you probably should do it more often.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
Comment from The Death
You nicely captured the fun one has with friends while skinny dipping during Summer. No one to judge there! It's a sweet poem. Excellent word economy, Good luck!
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You nicely captured the fun one has with friends while skinny dipping during Summer. No one to judge there! It's a sweet poem. Excellent word economy, Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
Comment from judelesemann
Love it, love it, loveit!!! I got such a good jiggly belly laugh from reading this wonderful poem. It brought forth wonderful images for me. Please write more like this gem. Be blessed, Jude
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Love it, love it, loveit!!! I got such a good jiggly belly laugh from reading this wonderful poem. It brought forth wonderful images for me. Please write more like this gem. Be blessed, Jude
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
Comment from kahpot
Very clever and very humorous, your opening lines sets the rest of the poem wonderfully, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Very clever and very humorous, your opening lines sets the rest of the poem wonderfully, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
