Wisdom
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Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on your publishing of your story, Iza! Rejoicing with you! And yes, it's a beautiful gift to have humor and resilience. Keep using them and sharing!
continue as Sisif (Sisyphus)
I have used Ty gifts. (Thy?) Not sure what is Ty.
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Congratulations on your publishing of your story, Iza! Rejoicing with you! And yes, it's a beautiful gift to have humor and resilience. Keep using them and sharing!
continue as Sisif (Sisyphus)
I have used Ty gifts. (Thy?) Not sure what is Ty.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
Comment from estory
A great piece on resilience and the role of a sense of humor in dealing with the curve balls life throws you. Whatever you can do, you can laugh, and somehow look over the valleys at the mountains on the other side. estory
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A great piece on resilience and the role of a sense of humor in dealing with the curve balls life throws you. Whatever you can do, you can laugh, and somehow look over the valleys at the mountains on the other side. estory
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
Comment from DeboraDyess
Hello, Iza!
I think we've all felt this way. At least, I know I have.
A couple of thoughts on punctuation...
My face was not having the right markings to be let in the special kingdom. >> Not sure about 'my face isnot having the right markings. I knkow you're saying you dno't look like the 'in crowd', but the wording here is a bit difficult. YOu might try to reword.
It's OK, I know it will not be the last time. I must try again next month hoping to finally win this game. >> Another thought hitting the wall, and I'm resting here alone.
again next month hoping to finally >> again next month, hoping to finally
have used Ty gifts >> have used Thy gifts
Congratulations! And what a beautiful praise to our Lord for your success. :) I know that you feel so fulfilled irght now. It's an amazing feeling, isn't it. :)
Be blessed,
Deb
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Hello, Iza!
I think we've all felt this way. At least, I know I have.
A couple of thoughts on punctuation...
My face was not having the right markings to be let in the special kingdom. >> Not sure about 'my face isnot having the right markings. I knkow you're saying you dno't look like the 'in crowd', but the wording here is a bit difficult. YOu might try to reword.
It's OK, I know it will not be the last time. I must try again next month hoping to finally win this game. >> Another thought hitting the wall, and I'm resting here alone.
again next month hoping to finally >> again next month, hoping to finally
have used Ty gifts >> have used Thy gifts
Congratulations! And what a beautiful praise to our Lord for your success. :) I know that you feel so fulfilled irght now. It's an amazing feeling, isn't it. :)
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(typos: Sisif s/b Sisyphus; Ty gifts s/b THY) Wry self-deprecating humor--hitting the wall and resting--try again next month re contest still never won--join my club! Cheers. LIZ
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(typos: Sisif s/b Sisyphus; Ty gifts s/b THY) Wry self-deprecating humor--hitting the wall and resting--try again next month re contest still never won--join my club! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
