Farm Life
A Poem17 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh very good job with this tribute to Dean Kuch. A terror rific tale of getting lost in a storm and having to resort to shall we say making do with the resources at hand.
My only suggestion is to align your lines because this is written in pretty good metre and rhyme, but not necessary at all.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Oh very good job with this tribute to Dean Kuch. A terror rific tale of getting lost in a storm and having to resort to shall we say making do with the resources at hand.
My only suggestion is to align your lines because this is written in pretty good metre and rhyme, but not necessary at all.
A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this great review..I always appreciate it. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm not usually into horror but this poem was good. It actually reminded me of some of Dean's work. Your poem rhymes, makes sense, and is entertaining. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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I'm not usually into horror but this poem was good. It actually reminded me of some of Dean's work. Your poem rhymes, makes sense, and is entertaining. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you. that's a great compliment. I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from papa55mike
This one has a nice Donner Party feeling to it. Bently little wrote a story titled "Recycle" that resembles this poem. Look it up, it's worth the read.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This one has a nice Donner Party feeling to it. Bently little wrote a story titled "Recycle" that resembles this poem. Look it up, it's worth the read.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review. I'll definitely check out that story.
Comment from Mia Twysted
There is an intersting story in this piece. How the children made sure to provide for themselves makes me wonder what there parts had been teaching them. However, it was hard to read aloud. I couldn't find the beat and I stumbled through the words.
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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There is an intersting story in this piece. How the children made sure to provide for themselves makes me wonder what there parts had been teaching them. However, it was hard to read aloud. I couldn't find the beat and I stumbled through the words.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good work. I guess that you need to be careful in every situation because things may not be as they initially appear. I think that Dean would be proud of what you've presented here. Thanks for sharing this grisly and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This is really good work. I guess that you need to be careful in every situation because things may not be as they initially appear. I think that Dean would be proud of what you've presented here. Thanks for sharing this grisly and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this great 6 star review. It's always nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 3 Words In A Poem writing prompt contest. You used the required words...animal - horror - short....good job.
Heh heh heh ... Dean would have loved this cannibal horror story. Well done.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 3 Words In A Poem writing prompt contest. You used the required words...animal - horror - short....good job.
Heh heh heh ... Dean would have loved this cannibal horror story. Well done.
Gypsy
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem...it's appreciated more than you know.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an excellent entry for the 3 Words in a Poem contest.
The story is well told and clear within the verse.
Truly a horror.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I think this is an excellent entry for the 3 Words in a Poem contest.
The story is well told and clear within the verse.
Truly a horror.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this great 6 star review. You are awesome! :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is horror deluxe! This is a most gripping writing from beginning to end. Your imagination is deep and rich. You have a way with words. Great story poem!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This is horror deluxe! This is a most gripping writing from beginning to end. Your imagination is deep and rich. You have a way with words. Great story poem!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
hi author,
This rhyme emphasizes the duty & sacrifice of a young woman in a blizzard--so it's that much more horrible for such a nice person to be cannibalized at the hands of children who appear to delight in murdering adults.
If only the parents had stored sufficient food provisions to sustain & nourish the whole family through a terrible winter!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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hi author,
This rhyme emphasizes the duty & sacrifice of a young woman in a blizzard--so it's that much more horrible for such a nice person to be cannibalized at the hands of children who appear to delight in murdering adults.
If only the parents had stored sufficient food provisions to sustain & nourish the whole family through a terrible winter!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I think that would work if they were normal kids...but there was definitely something evil going on. Thank you for reading. :)
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nothing else to say right now except to remind everyone to store food provisions against that proverbial blizzardy day
Comment from Dorinda Palmisano
This was quite a story. Children of the corn indeed. You are very clever with your surprise turn of events and subtle rhyme that just sneaks up on you. I really enjoyed this. Thank you very much for this different read.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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This was quite a story. Children of the corn indeed. You are very clever with your surprise turn of events and subtle rhyme that just sneaks up on you. I really enjoyed this. Thank you very much for this different read.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and for this great review. :)
