Feeling
The path to healing18 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork.
-A good topic and rhyme.
-The message is positive,
showing how we need
to be true to ourselves
so we can have the best
possible life.
-The word re/al is two syllables,
giving you 7.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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-Nice artwork.
-A good topic and rhyme.
-The message is positive,
showing how we need
to be true to ourselves
so we can have the best
possible life.
-The word re/al is two syllables,
giving you 7.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thanks very much for the kind review and encouragement. Thanks also for pointing out the syllable count for re-al. I learned something new today. That's what happens when one assumes. I am normally a fastidious fact-checker, but this time I just assumed. I have notified the Contest Committee and hopefully they let me edited it.
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Just an update, the Contest Committee informed me that, according to their references, the word real can be one of two syllables, so they are accepting my entry. Thanks again, for your review.
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You are welcome. I'm glad you are in the contest.
Comment from kahpot
Very well written and I like your use of the rhyming words in this short work, I would have liked the poem in the center of this wonderful work, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Very well written and I like your use of the rhyming words in this short work, I would have liked the poem in the center of this wonderful work, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Kahpot, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks very much for the very kind review and advice. I took your advice and centered the text.
Definitely looks better that way. Thanks again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write and healing ourselves in a spiritual way here as we look to the heavens for support, a fine 1-6-1 here, good luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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A faithful write and healing ourselves in a spiritual way here as we look to the heavens for support, a fine 1-6-1 here, good luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Dolly, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the kind review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your eight syllables in this uplifting, thought-provoking. Some people just become numb, not realizing the mindset that has taken them.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You have made excellent use of your eight syllables in this uplifting, thought-provoking. Some people just become numb, not realizing the mindset that has taken them.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Janice, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks very much for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Feel- heal to be real, I like the message of your 1-6-1 poem and I think it's perfect for the contest. It has a certain musicality and rhythm. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Feel- heal to be real, I like the message of your 1-6-1 poem and I think it's perfect for the contest. It has a certain musicality and rhythm. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Iza, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a lovely entry for the contest. There is so much meaning behind your words of advice. They can be applied in so many instances with a different conotation in each case. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a lovely entry for the contest. There is so much meaning behind your words of advice. They can be applied in so many instances with a different conotation in each case. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Raffaelina, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks very much for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
. Wow!!!!! What an excellent piece of work;!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!!; Awesome job!!! Keep writing!!!!!!!
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Dear author,
. Wow!!!!! What an excellent piece of work;!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!!; Awesome job!!! Keep writing!!!!!!!
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Anne-Marie, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the wonderful review and very kind words and encouragement.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Yes. Never deny your feelings. A truly
Powerful poem. No more needs to be said. It's complete. The image is magical. I like it a lot,
May I quote you ?!
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Yes. Never deny your feelings. A truly
Powerful poem. No more needs to be said. It's complete. The image is magical. I like it a lot,
May I quote you ?!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Carlo's girl, thanks so much for the wonderful review and kind words. Please do quote me.
