Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We take the air we breathe for granted and without it we would cease to exist, this is a tribute to the air that we cannot see but it is life saving, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. We all need air :)

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2020

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Comment from Janice Canerdy

Good

Yes, as the Bible points out, the air goes where it pleases. We can't tell precisely from where it comes or predict exactly where it will go. I gave a 4 because "where" is off-rhyme.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020

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Comment from Anne-Marie brison

Excellent

Dear author,


Wow!!!; What an excellent piece of work!!!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!!!!! Awesome job!!! Keep writing!!!!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Good job with the syllable count per line and the end rhymes. I like the image you paired with your words, too. You give readers something to think about in a good way.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Wonderful, yes it is something for us all to wonder about "where" great artwork for these words, love the rhyme words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020

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Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, Breathe In, has the right set up and sees air as that THING which decides our future just by being here. Thank you air.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020

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Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I like this piece for it ask a question I have ask myself from time to time. Where is the air. Why can't we see it? That which we need to continue on is invisible to us.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020

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