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Comment from amada
You have written great liones, dear poet; "light dancing on the river..." wow. Sometimes the things that we take for granted has a magic touch, if we put attention. And poetry brings out all that magic. I love your poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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You have written great liones, dear poet; "light dancing on the river..." wow. Sometimes the things that we take for granted has a magic touch, if we put attention. And poetry brings out all that magic. I love your poem.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Carlos' girl
I like this, I love lakes; I'm originally from Illinois. We have many small lakes and then of course, the great lakes.
It is such a nice thing to just sit by a lake and watch the light shine.
Thank you for a joyful poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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I like this, I love lakes; I'm originally from Illinois. We have many small lakes and then of course, the great lakes.
It is such a nice thing to just sit by a lake and watch the light shine.
Thank you for a joyful poem.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Excellent artistic presentation and visuals in this poem. Your words just dance on the page inviting the reader on an exciting journey. This would make a great entry in the 1-6-1 poetry contest. I enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Excellent artistic presentation and visuals in this poem. Your words just dance on the page inviting the reader on an exciting journey. This would make a great entry in the 1-6-1 poetry contest. I enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
That picture and your words go together powerfully well! Oh, I do hope this poem does well in the 15 Syllable Poem contest. It is the perfect entry! I'm rooting for you!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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That picture and your words go together powerfully well! Oh, I do hope this poem does well in the 15 Syllable Poem contest. It is the perfect entry! I'm rooting for you!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging words.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. Is the best one in the contest. You have my vote.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. Is the best one in the contest. You have my vote.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the lights dancing on the water surface bring delight to the onlookers with a sight that bis bright and joyful.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the lights dancing on the water surface bring delight to the onlookers with a sight that bis bright and joyful.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your inspiring review.
Comment from harmony13
This author's words convey a peaceful scene. I imagined sitting by a lake and in visioning these words. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome and goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This author's words convey a peaceful scene. I imagined sitting by a lake and in visioning these words. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome and goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from The Death
Fine use of personification in this poem. This should do well in the prompt, considering that your words speak on their own even in absence of any artwork. I guess you might have to get rid of puppies and a nasty non-poetic duck on the way. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Fine use of personification in this poem. This should do well in the prompt, considering that your words speak on their own even in absence of any artwork. I guess you might have to get rid of puppies and a nasty non-poetic duck on the way. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the rhyme.
-Effective imagery and
personification of the lake.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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-Very nice image.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the rhyme.
-Effective imagery and
personification of the lake.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thanks.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This glistening effect is very pleasing and the light dancing on the lake can be blinding, you captured the moment here in your rhyming 1-6-1, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This glistening effect is very pleasing and the light dancing on the lake can be blinding, you captured the moment here in your rhyming 1-6-1, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank so much.
