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A Lune3 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown
Writer of a lune with 3-3-5 syllables. You have an excellent way of saying, :To better myself, I need to reflect before I
do something unexpected.
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Hello unknown
Writer of a lune with 3-3-5 syllables. You have an excellent way of saying, :To better myself, I need to reflect before I
do something unexpected.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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My friend, I am glad you like this write and thank you kindly.
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You are welcome.
Gert
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
That's great. I love the first two lines. You could have ended it there. But the last line really drives the point home. Amen! Great job you say so much with just thee lines. Loved it.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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That's great. I love the first two lines. You could have ended it there. But the last line really drives the point home. Amen! Great job you say so much with just thee lines. Loved it.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Hello again Michael, very kind of you, thank you.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent lune poem like a senryu
Hide sight is often quite illuminating,
whether direct light or reflected,
at least it's insight.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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You've written an excellent lune poem like a senryu
Hide sight is often quite illuminating,
whether direct light or reflected,
at least it's insight.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Hello Robert and thank you for stopping by and the wonderful insights; I appreciate it very much.
