Consumption
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Within the Placebo?"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Another strong write. I enjoy the messages in your poem and the fact that everything comes from the heart. I love your final stanza where you describe birth with being reeled in. An enjoyable and powerful message.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Another strong write. I enjoy the messages in your poem and the fact that everything comes from the heart. I love your final stanza where you describe birth with being reeled in. An enjoyable and powerful message.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thanks again Michael for spending you precious time reading my work.
And, another beautiful and amazing review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
'But there's fishing below going on and the reels are cast!'
That line so uniquely put, is the whole piece rolled into one. This had my emotions where they belonged. Very good
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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'But there's fishing below going on and the reels are cast!'
That line so uniquely put, is the whole piece rolled into one. This had my emotions where they belonged. Very good
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Working tissue donation is not only beautiful but amazing process today.
The thinking the future that they can clone us freeze us and utilize what we need to continue to live on for perhaps two hundred years would be incredible!
Thanks again Barb.
What's the next one I wrote his lengthy and the second piece I believe it's incredible it's about my suicide.
Ricky
