A Magical Meeting
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Wait"Who was that?
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Comment from Gloria ....
This is just enchanting, Yvonne. So magical to have the place where this world meets with another world in a magic seam. Having it associated with the playing of a piper.
Written in your signature pristine metre and rhyme this lyrical poem is a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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This is just enchanting, Yvonne. So magical to have the place where this world meets with another world in a magic seam. Having it associated with the playing of a piper.
Written in your signature pristine metre and rhyme this lyrical poem is a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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I am honored by your wonderful compliments. Thank you so much, Gloria.
Comment from judiverse
This certainly has a mystical atmosphere, and the presentation is lovely. The artwork adds to the ethereal feeling. Like every young woman, the narrator is waiting to hear the pipes and see the man she has dreamed of. She knows he's going to come, so she's ready to wait. This is a lovely fairy tale, and I hope the man of her dreams will come. Excellent rhyme and beautifully worded. judi
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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This certainly has a mystical atmosphere, and the presentation is lovely. The artwork adds to the ethereal feeling. Like every young woman, the narrator is waiting to hear the pipes and see the man she has dreamed of. She knows he's going to come, so she's ready to wait. This is a lovely fairy tale, and I hope the man of her dreams will come. Excellent rhyme and beautifully worded. judi
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it, and I appreciate this wonderful review and stars!
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You're very welcome. Your poems are always lovely. judi
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow, this is quite a piece from you. It is excellent and the wording beings images so clear and precise. I love the wording and the excellent way it is presented.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Wow, this is quite a piece from you. It is excellent and the wording beings images so clear and precise. I love the wording and the excellent way it is presented.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for this fantastic review. I appreciate it and am so glad you liked my poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fantasy poem about the wait in the forest for the fairies to come out and play. Wait also for the man who plays the pipes that join his world with yours by a magical seam.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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A very well-written fantasy poem about the wait in the forest for the fairies to come out and play. Wait also for the man who plays the pipes that join his world with yours by a magical seam.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you. We'll see what happens next.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last. We ladies have great patience don't we.?
Thank you for sharing this heart felted poem.
Cookie
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last. We ladies have great patience don't we.?
Thank you for sharing this heart felted poem.
Cookie
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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We certainly do. Thank you for a great review.
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Your very welcome, have a blessed day
Cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Memories indeed stay with us of happy times and stroke our hearts with love and soothe us as we remember them our dreams, a fine write with good meter and rhymes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Memories indeed stay with us of happy times and stroke our hearts with love and soothe us as we remember them our dreams, a fine write with good meter and rhymes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
This is well written with excellent rhyme and meter. The descriptions in your narrative are very well constructed as the lady repeats her refrain of wistfulness.
The poem reads very smoothly. There is no strain in making the meter work.
Robert
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello Yvonne.
This is well written with excellent rhyme and meter. The descriptions in your narrative are very well constructed as the lady repeats her refrain of wistfulness.
The poem reads very smoothly. There is no strain in making the meter work.
Robert
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I appreciate this great review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is absolutely beautiful. The iambic pentameters are perfect. It reminds me of Milton's Lycidas. The language is magnificent I love it. The Green Man is out there somewhere and is about to appear.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This is absolutely beautiful. The iambic pentameters are perfect. It reminds me of Milton's Lycidas. The language is magnificent I love it. The Green Man is out there somewhere and is about to appear.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Oh, thank you, thank you, Jim! I'm thrilled you like it. What a compliment.
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Is this why you asked about the meter beaters?
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No, not at all. I like the clubs because they keep me challenged. Your was especially good because of your knowledge of poetry and how it should be written. There are many of us on here that need that guidance.
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Your reply honours me. Thank you.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Very beautiful rhyming poem. The enchanted forest is clearly to be seen in the picture, which suits the poem well. I love the romantic, longing tone in this poem. "and while the leaves blow gently in the breeze, I wait to hear the pipes and see the man". Lovely!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Very beautiful rhyming poem. The enchanted forest is clearly to be seen in the picture, which suits the poem well. I love the romantic, longing tone in this poem. "and while the leaves blow gently in the breeze, I wait to hear the pipes and see the man". Lovely!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for a great review. Very much appreciated.
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Very welcome!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very poignant piece that refers to someone in the past who appeared and disappeared. Obviously he made a huge impression on this soul who will wait forever, it seems. I shall read the previous chapters soon to get the full picture. A lovely poem, well written.
:)Ralf
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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A very poignant piece that refers to someone in the past who appeared and disappeared. Obviously he made a huge impression on this soul who will wait forever, it seems. I shall read the previous chapters soon to get the full picture. A lovely poem, well written.
:)Ralf
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Oh, thank you. I'm so glad you like it and want to read the others. I'm going to have to change the font to make it consistent Evil Eddie the Editor wouldn't let me bring my favorite font over to FS.
