Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Snowy Freeze"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Pantygynt
Another sweet couplet to be worked into this multi-author work. Essentially the renga would seem to be a set of tanka, split between authors. Is an editor going to link them all in order I wonder.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Another sweet couplet to be worked into this multi-author work. Essentially the renga would seem to be a set of tanka, split between authors. Is an editor going to link them all in order I wonder.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review and I tried to make my couplet follow on, I appreciate your words here, love Dolly x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
It seems strange to me to read about winter in July, and blocks me somewhat. The first line is rather proactive, but the second lives up to the word calm, and creates an intesnse feeling of peace.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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It seems strange to me to read about winter in July, and blocks me somewhat. The first line is rather proactive, but the second lives up to the word calm, and creates an intesnse feeling of peace.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you Katherine for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
