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Comment from ameen786
Cute! My muse would simply pretend dead; congratulations my friend, a very well and creative composed write; unique and original; thanks for sharing and please stay safe.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Cute! My muse would simply pretend dead; congratulations my friend, a very well and creative composed write; unique and original; thanks for sharing and please stay safe.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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And a review to lift the spirit ! thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Congratulations on your First Place final with this well written, I Love... 5-7-5 entry. I've heard many Creaks at midnight but never have I had a Muse slip in. Thanks for the thoughts. Best regards.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Congratulations on your First Place final with this well written, I Love... 5-7-5 entry. I've heard many Creaks at midnight but never have I had a Muse slip in. Thanks for the thoughts. Best regards.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Ah ..thanks for that superb & humorous review ! zanya
Comment from UpNorth
Mine would come in at 5 a.m. but the creak of my mind opening that door of creativity is just as vivid. Good imagery that any writer coould relate to. Thank you!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Mine would come in at 5 a.m. but the creak of my mind opening that door of creativity is just as vivid. Good imagery that any writer coould relate to. Thank you!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from __Lou__
I'll start by saying I think this is the best in the competition! I wish I had seen it sooner because I would say I think the title might turn people away. So many periods is not necessary and it is not appealing to look at. A simple ellipses would suffice, but I would even say having a more unique title would help with clicks. I won't lie, this was one of the last ones I read simply because other titles were more appealing. But this entry is far better than most of them, so it makes me sad to think that people might not have read it because of the title. I really hope you win. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I'll start by saying I think this is the best in the competition! I wish I had seen it sooner because I would say I think the title might turn people away. So many periods is not necessary and it is not appealing to look at. A simple ellipses would suffice, but I would even say having a more unique title would help with clicks. I won't lie, this was one of the last ones I read simply because other titles were more appealing. But this entry is far better than most of them, so it makes me sad to think that people might not have read it because of the title. I really hope you win. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thanks for taking time to read and comment so comprehensively and for such considered suggestions - I am simply delighted ! zanya
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You are very welcome Zanya.
Comment from LisaMay
I love the originality of this verse... It captures the anticipatory thrill of the writer working away at midnight, knowing that help is on the way. I hope the Muse brought cookies too.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I love the originality of this verse... It captures the anticipatory thrill of the writer working away at midnight, knowing that help is on the way. I hope the Muse brought cookies too.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Superb review especially 'anticipatory thrill' zanya
Comment from roof35
You followed the rules and penned an excellent entry for the contest. Your illustration pairs well and brings the muse to mind. You said a lot in your few words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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You followed the rules and penned an excellent entry for the contest. Your illustration pairs well and brings the muse to mind. You said a lot in your few words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Superb review zanya
Comment from lynglyng
Very well done! The way you convey an entire message with such a short poem. Good rhyming and flow. A very well thought out and developed poem. I would like to hear more of what happens after the muse arrives.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Very well done! The way you convey an entire message with such a short poem. Good rhyming and flow. A very well thought out and developed poem. I would like to hear more of what happens after the muse arrives.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
