Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "The Beginning of a New Adventure"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
19 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Another good memory with your deceased husband that you are writing to be able to share it with your children, This is a wonderful idea.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Another good memory with your deceased husband that you are writing to be able to share it with your children, This is a wonderful idea.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
You've related a very exciting story in this chapter! Your daughter Carol was very proactive and resourceful, for a child -- thank God! I once got myself stuck, completely alone, in a high-rise office building in Manhattan, working as an office temp, late at night, but I will have to fill you in on another occasion. You have my sympathy!
St. Charles Avenue leads through this area, and further down on Magazine St. is the Audubon Zoo and park.
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St. Charles Avenue leads through this area, and further down on Magazine Street is the Audubon Zoo and park.
That first day we'd dropped you off at work and agreed to pick you up in the afternoon when you got off work.
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That first day, we'd dropped you off at work and agreed to pick you up in the afternoon, when you got off work.
We did quite a bit of driving over the area and checking out interesting things that first day.
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We did quite a bit of driving over the area and checking out interesting things.
In 1972, The World Trade Center was one of the taller buildings at thirty-three stories.
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In 1972, The World Trade Center was one of the taller buildings, at thirty-three stories.
"I guess it wouldn't hurt to let you all go up there." he said.
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"I guess it wouldn't hurt to let you all go up there," he said.
...to see most of downtown and the Mississippi river.
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...to see most of downtown and the Mississippi River.
I opened a very thick door and walked in, but once inside I realized there was nothing there except a stairwell that lead all thirty-three floors down.
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I opened a very thick door and walked in, but once inside, I realized there was nothing there except a stairwell that led all thirty-three floors down. [I think "led" is the right spelling here, but I'm actually not sure!]
I turned to go out only to find the door through which I had entered was locked to the outside.
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I turned to go out, only to find the door through which I had entered was locked to the outside.
I had on high-heel shoes,
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I was wearing high-heeled shoes,
Thanks for sharing another chapter in your exciting life as a young mother.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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You've related a very exciting story in this chapter! Your daughter Carol was very proactive and resourceful, for a child -- thank God! I once got myself stuck, completely alone, in a high-rise office building in Manhattan, working as an office temp, late at night, but I will have to fill you in on another occasion. You have my sympathy!
St. Charles Avenue leads through this area, and further down on Magazine St. is the Audubon Zoo and park.
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St. Charles Avenue leads through this area, and further down on Magazine Street is the Audubon Zoo and park.
That first day we'd dropped you off at work and agreed to pick you up in the afternoon when you got off work.
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That first day, we'd dropped you off at work and agreed to pick you up in the afternoon, when you got off work.
We did quite a bit of driving over the area and checking out interesting things that first day.
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We did quite a bit of driving over the area and checking out interesting things.
In 1972, The World Trade Center was one of the taller buildings at thirty-three stories.
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In 1972, The World Trade Center was one of the taller buildings, at thirty-three stories.
"I guess it wouldn't hurt to let you all go up there." he said.
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"I guess it wouldn't hurt to let you all go up there," he said.
...to see most of downtown and the Mississippi river.
-->
...to see most of downtown and the Mississippi River.
I opened a very thick door and walked in, but once inside I realized there was nothing there except a stairwell that lead all thirty-three floors down.
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I opened a very thick door and walked in, but once inside, I realized there was nothing there except a stairwell that led all thirty-three floors down. [I think "led" is the right spelling here, but I'm actually not sure!]
I turned to go out only to find the door through which I had entered was locked to the outside.
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I turned to go out, only to find the door through which I had entered was locked to the outside.
I had on high-heel shoes,
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I was wearing high-heeled shoes,
Thanks for sharing another chapter in your exciting life as a young mother.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I am delighted that you read my story and as usually did such a wonderful job of catching things I missed. I've corrected them thanks to you. You know I'm thrilled with the six stars. Thank you so much. I hope ;you'll write about the time you were locked in in New York.
Beth
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Dear Beth, it's always such a pleasure to hear back from you, when I review your work! I'm sorry it's taken some time for me to respond, but my personal life has been filled with extra responsibilities because my husband Jorge has been sick a lot, plus he fell in the bathroom and bruised two ribs -- I thank God it wasn't worse than that -- but having some disabilities myself, it's been a tough go, these past two weeks. He's getting better, by the grace of God. He's feeling so good right now that he's laughing at a comedian with his headphones on, making it hard for me to concentrate ;-)
I love your new profile pic! The former one was very nice too, but this one is also attractive and features a cute kitty, who you obviously love!
Yes, I got myself trapped in a building, in the wee hours of the morning, and in a nutshell, I had to call the FDNY to be rescued! I was actually able to ride down the elevator before they arrived, but I wasn't invited back again to work at that assignment! It might make a good short story or flash nonfiction, even though I've spilled the beans, in advance... although I doubt many people are reading all of these reviews. Ah, yes, memories! Some moments to enjoy, and others to laugh about. God bless you, my friend. - Mary Kay xoxo
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I so sorry to learn you've been dealing with problem but is good to know everyone is on the mend. The other picture was 10 years old. This one was within the last year. I get locked in where I'm working again as well. I just didn't realize everyone had gone home but me. I hope you write your story. Thanks for the long personal answer.
Beth
Comment from Spitfire
I've been to Louisiana once, the French Quarter to be exact. Frank and I went to what almost amounted to a porn show!
How scary to be so high up and be locked out from your children. Panic for sure. Lesson learned: always let your children know where you are. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I've been to Louisiana once, the French Quarter to be exact. Frank and I went to what almost amounted to a porn show!
How scary to be so high up and be locked out from your children. Panic for sure. Lesson learned: always let your children know where you are. :-)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This would be the perfect spot to catch a porn show. I never went to one but they were well advertised. Thank you for the review. That incident did scare me pretty bad but it wasn't the last time I got scared in New Orleans.
Beth
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
In a new city and discovering the city's sites, when the door becomes locked behind you. How frightening. I am sure that your new way of life perhaps brought much excitement to you and your family. New adventures!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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In a new city and discovering the city's sites, when the door becomes locked behind you. How frightening. I am sure that your new way of life perhaps brought much excitement to you and your family. New adventures!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Yes that was scary. I have a way of getting myself in trouble. I think my son takes after me.
Thank you so much for the reviews.
Beth
Comment from Ulla
My goodness, Beth, this is so well written. You had me in a fright when you described how you'd been locked into that stairwell. I can just imagine all the nightmares you envisaged.
I've been to New Orleans a couple of times driving down from Missouri after visiting my friends there. I have to say that I love the French quarters. But then again, in Denmark we are brought up with Jazz.
Can't wait to be reading on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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My goodness, Beth, this is so well written. You had me in a fright when you described how you'd been locked into that stairwell. I can just imagine all the nightmares you envisaged.
I've been to New Orleans a couple of times driving down from Missouri after visiting my friends there. I have to say that I love the French quarters. But then again, in Denmark we are brought up with Jazz.
Can't wait to be reading on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you Ulla, I appreciate the review and comments and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
Beth
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Wow, Your Carol is a lot like my Nancy. She was always my savior when things got tough. LOL You are somewhat more adventurous than I am. I am a home body and love to be home but I had several jobs through the years. This was an interesting chapter. I felt your panic both times. LOL Nancy:)
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Wow, Your Carol is a lot like my Nancy. She was always my savior when things got tough. LOL You are somewhat more adventurous than I am. I am a home body and love to be home but I had several jobs through the years. This was an interesting chapter. I felt your panic both times. LOL Nancy:)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much Nandy. I enjoyed reading your comments. Yes Carol came through for me a lot of times.
Beth
Comment from Mistydawn
New Orlandends sounds like a fun, exciting place. A lot to see and do for sure. I love how you touched on some of the places. It made me feel like I was there. I can't imagine how frightened you were being stuck like that. I'm glad your daughter found you, and that everyone was alright. This is a well-written, interesting piece. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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New Orlandends sounds like a fun, exciting place. A lot to see and do for sure. I love how you touched on some of the places. It made me feel like I was there. I can't imagine how frightened you were being stuck like that. I'm glad your daughter found you, and that everyone was alright. This is a well-written, interesting piece. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. It is very interesting place to live.
Beth
Comment from zanya
OMG- ! my parental heart started racing on reading about the locked door! you all made it safely though - exciting times to come in this new chapter in your lives ?
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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OMG- ! my parental heart started racing on reading about the locked door! you all made it safely though - exciting times to come in this new chapter in your lives ?
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments Yes it caused my heart to race. It could have ended badly.
Beth
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Beth, your last sentence gives the clue! No it would not be the last time you found a reason to panic in your new home city.
You now have me on pins and needles waiting to discover the source of your next reasons to panic.
Post as soon as you can?
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Dear Beth, your last sentence gives the clue! No it would not be the last time you found a reason to panic in your new home city.
You now have me on pins and needles waiting to discover the source of your next reasons to panic.
Post as soon as you can?
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you Suzanna, I'm quite capable of getting myself in trouble at regular intervals and so are my children but every chapter won't end in a panic. However, stay tuned. Some will.
Beth
Comment from Mastery
Hi Beth. Nice to check in with you again and see what has progressed. I am sorry I don't have more time to review all of your chapters my friend. I love the "human situations" in this and all of the chapters I have read.
Great imagery in this chapter too, Beth, like: " when Christi noticed the distressed expression on my face as I came up sputtering and coughing. She yelled "Get off her. You're killing my mama."
And here: " I had on high-heel shoes, so I pulled one off and used the heel to bang on the door, but still no one could hear me."
Good job on this one, my friend. Keep up the good work. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Hi Beth. Nice to check in with you again and see what has progressed. I am sorry I don't have more time to review all of your chapters my friend. I love the "human situations" in this and all of the chapters I have read.
Great imagery in this chapter too, Beth, like: " when Christi noticed the distressed expression on my face as I came up sputtering and coughing. She yelled "Get off her. You're killing my mama."
And here: " I had on high-heel shoes, so I pulled one off and used the heel to bang on the door, but still no one could hear me."
Good job on this one, my friend. Keep up the good work. : ) Bob
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Bob, I understand and I'm pleased that you check in every now and then. This book is mostly for my children and grandchildren, but I delighted that I have some that read it regularly. One of these days I'lI try a novel, but for me it is easy to write stories that already exist in my head. Thanks so much.
Beth
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Believe me, Beth, I completely understand and it seems to be very effective writing as is. Keep on keeping on, my friend. : ) Bob
