Comment from prayingpoet

Good

Line 1: Beckoning (o harvest reaper!) Oh?
Line 2: Appealing (stay short after heat and rain?)?????
Line 3: Blooming (poets, flowers bloom!) Nice line

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from steevie

Excellent

How true!!! Yes, good things come from harvest time and its seen in nature and in mankind as well. good job on this thoughtful piece

steve

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Nice short prose that ushers in the change of seasons .. very hard format to write in but you did an excellent job on this KUDOS
TK

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from EMB

Excellent

I'll have to say "Amen" to that, my friend. I appreciate any poem that seems to be ushering in better weather than we've been having during the past few weeks. Very nice. :)

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from words

Average

The punctuation is oddly placed and disrupts the flow.

The first line is not a complete sentence so it should not end with an exclamation mark.
Also, If you are using punctuation you need a comma after "o" and it should be spelled "oh".
The second line is neither a complete sentence or a question, so it should not have a question mark.

The sentiment is there, the execution is not.

d

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from GarthL

Excellent

It's a beautiful thing when poets and flowers bloom to be certain and it is at the behest of the Maker of the all and everything. Well expressed in your syllable perfect 5-7-5. A really wonderful image completes the visual pleasure of the page. StriveOn'n'livelong, Garth

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by GarthL on 01-Apr-2013

Cheers!!!

Comment from shy1250

Exceptional

This poem has immense power, belied by the small letters with which you punctuate. Usually I give a fave line, but love this, all of this. Am praying as I write this, as I am coveting your talent something fierce! Kudos! later and God bless, shy

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That is beautiful, and so deserving a 6 but I have none left. I enjoyed your author notes too. Thought limitless. That is the way a poem is meant to be, each getting their own interpretation of the words, be it yours of anyone elses. Great write,and a pleasure to read xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"o harvest reaper!
stay short after heat and rain?
poets, flowers bloom!"
this is a beautiful ode to agriculture:) both poets and flowers bloom, or poets, flowers bloom?
anyhoo thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

This piece has it all working. The words are carefully selected. The photo is beautiful. The message is clear and the syllable count is correct. What more can I ask for?

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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