O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Black_Oxygen
With very few words, this poetry speaks of poetic
tribute. The attached photo is a befitting accent
that enhances the message. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
With very few words, this poetry speaks of poetic
tribute. The attached photo is a befitting accent
that enhances the message. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Gungalo
o harvest reaper!
stay short after heat and rain?
poets, flowers bloom!
A good 5/7/5 write with wonderful words to make it awesome to the reader. I like the thought of poets and flowers blooming.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
o harvest reaper!
stay short after heat and rain?
poets, flowers bloom!
A good 5/7/5 write with wonderful words to make it awesome to the reader. I like the thought of poets and flowers blooming.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR INSIGHTFUL REVIEW.
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Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. It is nice to see how the economy of words can say so much. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
This is an interesting piece. It is nice to see how the economy of words can say so much. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR GOOD REVIEW.
Comment from vkmack
The first line is wonderful--full of longing and appeal to the heavens. With the next two lines, we begin to understand the change of seasons (and the hope that fall has arrived)along with the inspiration it brings. This is lovely work.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
The first line is wonderful--full of longing and appeal to the heavens. With the next two lines, we begin to understand the change of seasons (and the hope that fall has arrived)along with the inspiration it brings. This is lovely work.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
o harvest reaper!
stay short after heat and rain?
poets[,] flowers bloom! - a redundant comma here.
I enjoy anything to do with nature - all God's creations.
Margaret
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
o harvest reaper!
stay short after heat and rain?
poets[,] flowers bloom! - a redundant comma here.
I enjoy anything to do with nature - all God's creations.
Margaret
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW.
Comment from donaldww
The harvest reaper stays a short time after the heat and rain. Poets and flowers bloom. Well, poets might, but flowers bloom in the spring.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
The harvest reaper stays a short time after the heat and rain. Poets and flowers bloom. Well, poets might, but flowers bloom in the spring.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Starlit Ink
This is a lovely write of Autumn, when the colors are vibrant and alive. It does seem to inspire poets, and lovers of nature. The imagery is lovely. Great work.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
This is a lovely write of Autumn, when the colors are vibrant and alive. It does seem to inspire poets, and lovers of nature. The imagery is lovely. Great work.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR LOVELY REVIEW.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done well again my friend this is well written and presented very well lets hope that the poets and flowers continue to bloom well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Yes you have done well again my friend this is well written and presented very well lets hope that the poets and flowers continue to bloom well done regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Cornetist
Well, this makes a bit more sense than others of yours that I have read but, still, there remains a level of incoherency. The first line is clear enough as is the last line...but...the middle line seems to have no connection to the others. What, exactly, do you mean?
Cornetist
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Well, this makes a bit more sense than others of yours that I have read but, still, there remains a level of incoherency. The first line is clear enough as is the last line...but...the middle line seems to have no connection to the others. What, exactly, do you mean?
Cornetist
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from L. Sherman
More than the Autumn it actually speaks to me of an Indian summer. Both the words and image just lull me into languid quietude that's indicative of late, hot burning summer days. Nice write.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
More than the Autumn it actually speaks to me of an Indian summer. Both the words and image just lull me into languid quietude that's indicative of late, hot burning summer days. Nice write.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR AUTHENTIC REVIEW.