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O My God and Mother Nature!

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Appreciation of God and Mother Nature

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Comment from Aussie
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I liked your 5-7-5 poem - short, but tells us that we as poets can write in any season. I liked the photograph to compliment your poem. All creatures and plants need to rest in the cooler months, we too rest in body but our spirit is busily thinking of poems and giving God thanks for His bounty. Well done poet.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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Comment from amahra
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I like "harvest reaper." Did you mean to say [oh] instead of O? When you say harvest reaper, do you mean, reaper as in death angel or reaper as in reap the benefits? Just curious.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    THANKS FOR QUEST REVIEW.
Comment from fairy77
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Nice one!Lovely changing of the leaves is beautiful.I loved this it was very nice.Congrats on your reviewing and now poetry.Happy Easter!beth fairy77.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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    THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Indie Skreet
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you lose out on a 'good' because once again over use of the exclamation mark many a writer keeps repeating is simply annoying still is being used.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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Comment from Dawn Munro
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Once more I find that you have created a poem that makes your reader stop and think about what you are saying - I love your last line too - we hope to bloom!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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reply by Dawn Munro on 01-Apr-2013
    You are welcome.
Comment from emjaihammond
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"Poets, flowers bloom." A great line. This is an interesting 5-7-5, as your pieces always seem to be, and it causes me to stop and take it in. Beautiful as always.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    THANKS FOR FANTASTIC REVIEW.
Comment from Bryana
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Beautiful 5-7-5 poem, perfect syllable count.
I love your poem except that I don't really bloom
in autumn, I bloom in spring along with my flowers.
The picture is perfect for the poem

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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    THANKS FOR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello Alcreator, I have read a few of your pieces and I find them alluring as they always make me think, make me stop to think of what you are saying. This one is no different. Well written and beautifully presented. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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    THANKS FOR EXCELLENT REVIEW.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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You seem to never run out of wonderful picture words! When attributing all to God it shows you are a 'poet bloom'. A flower in your creators garden. I enjoyed this one so much, Carolyn

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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Comment from Bayberry
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This has a lot of energy and I love the reference to poets. Poets and flowers go together beautifully. I'm glad I read this cheerful 5-7-5 style poem today.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013


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    THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.