O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Autumn"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from Aussie
I liked your 5-7-5 poem - short, but tells us that we as poets can write in any season. I liked the photograph to compliment your poem. All creatures and plants need to rest in the cooler months, we too rest in body but our spirit is busily thinking of poems and giving God thanks for His bounty. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
I liked your 5-7-5 poem - short, but tells us that we as poets can write in any season. I liked the photograph to compliment your poem. All creatures and plants need to rest in the cooler months, we too rest in body but our spirit is busily thinking of poems and giving God thanks for His bounty. Well done poet.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
Comment from amahra
I like "harvest reaper." Did you mean to say [oh] instead of O? When you say harvest reaper, do you mean, reaper as in death angel or reaper as in reap the benefits? Just curious.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
I like "harvest reaper." Did you mean to say [oh] instead of O? When you say harvest reaper, do you mean, reaper as in death angel or reaper as in reap the benefits? Just curious.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR QUEST REVIEW.
Comment from fairy77
Nice one!Lovely changing of the leaves is beautiful.I loved this it was very nice.Congrats on your reviewing and now poetry.Happy Easter!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Nice one!Lovely changing of the leaves is beautiful.I loved this it was very nice.Congrats on your reviewing and now poetry.Happy Easter!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Indie Skreet
you lose out on a 'good' because once again over use of the exclamation mark many a writer keeps repeating is simply annoying still is being used.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
you lose out on a 'good' because once again over use of the exclamation mark many a writer keeps repeating is simply annoying still is being used.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Once more I find that you have created a poem that makes your reader stop and think about what you are saying - I love your last line too - we hope to bloom!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Once more I find that you have created a poem that makes your reader stop and think about what you are saying - I love your last line too - we hope to bloom!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
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You are welcome.
Comment from emjaihammond
"Poets, flowers bloom." A great line. This is an interesting 5-7-5, as your pieces always seem to be, and it causes me to stop and take it in. Beautiful as always.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
"Poets, flowers bloom." A great line. This is an interesting 5-7-5, as your pieces always seem to be, and it causes me to stop and take it in. Beautiful as always.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR FANTASTIC REVIEW.
Comment from Bryana
Beautiful 5-7-5 poem, perfect syllable count.
I love your poem except that I don't really bloom
in autumn, I bloom in spring along with my flowers.
The picture is perfect for the poem
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Beautiful 5-7-5 poem, perfect syllable count.
I love your poem except that I don't really bloom
in autumn, I bloom in spring along with my flowers.
The picture is perfect for the poem
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Alcreator, I have read a few of your pieces and I find them alluring as they always make me think, make me stop to think of what you are saying. This one is no different. Well written and beautifully presented. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Hello Alcreator, I have read a few of your pieces and I find them alluring as they always make me think, make me stop to think of what you are saying. This one is no different. Well written and beautifully presented. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR EXCELLENT REVIEW.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
You seem to never run out of wonderful picture words! When attributing all to God it shows you are a 'poet bloom'. A flower in your creators garden. I enjoyed this one so much, Carolyn
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
You seem to never run out of wonderful picture words! When attributing all to God it shows you are a 'poet bloom'. A flower in your creators garden. I enjoyed this one so much, Carolyn
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR REFRESHING REVIEW.
Comment from Bayberry
This has a lot of energy and I love the reference to poets. Poets and flowers go together beautifully. I'm glad I read this cheerful 5-7-5 style poem today.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
This has a lot of energy and I love the reference to poets. Poets and flowers go together beautifully. I'm glad I read this cheerful 5-7-5 style poem today.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.