O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Thanks for the explanation in your notes. I think it is necessary. This 5/7/5 has the feeling of welcoming spring but I'm not sure what 'stay short.' means. Giddy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Thanks for the explanation in your notes. I think it is necessary. This 5/7/5 has the feeling of welcoming spring but I'm not sure what 'stay short.' means. Giddy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR QUEST REVIEW.
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
I admit that I have a preference for short poetry forms, so your shorter poems are among my favorite of your works. This is a wonderful 5-7-5! It reads beautifully and has multiple layers of imagery. A lot is said in 17 syllables! :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I admit that I have a preference for short poetry forms, so your shorter poems are among my favorite of your works. This is a wonderful 5-7-5! It reads beautifully and has multiple layers of imagery. A lot is said in 17 syllables! :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR FANTASTIC REVIEW.
Comment from Treischel
A wonderful 5-7-5 poem that paints the season and asks, then answers, the question of short length. All in a few words. Autumn is enjoyed. Y all, especially the poets. Nice!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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A wonderful 5-7-5 poem that paints the season and asks, then answers, the question of short length. All in a few words. Autumn is enjoyed. Y all, especially the poets. Nice!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hi there
This is yet another example of a good enough poet only putting down every third word. This is a poem about autumn, or springtime. It makes no sense in a poetic structure. Sorry, but that is MY interpretation
Bear
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Hi there
This is yet another example of a good enough poet only putting down every third word. This is a poem about autumn, or springtime. It makes no sense in a poetic structure. Sorry, but that is MY interpretation
Bear
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Crystal Carey
Hi Alcreator it is nice. You are right the harvest does not last long. I saw no misspelling or punctuation mistakes within (although punctuation really has no place in poetry.)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Hi Alcreator it is nice. You are right the harvest does not last long. I saw no misspelling or punctuation mistakes within (although punctuation really has no place in poetry.)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from S.Yocom
This is a nice little 5-7-5 poem, Alcreator Litt Dear. I especially like the final line. I guess you are right that both poets and flowers bloom after rain amd heat from the sun. I can hardly wait for that nice weather to help me.
Sally
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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This is a nice little 5-7-5 poem, Alcreator Litt Dear. I especially like the final line. I guess you are right that both poets and flowers bloom after rain amd heat from the sun. I can hardly wait for that nice weather to help me.
Sally
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from adewpearl
In this poem about autumn, I'm not sure why the flowers are blooming after the rain and after the harvest - makes it sound more like a spring poem than a fall poem.
two exclamation points in three little lines seems like overkill
and I can't tell why the second line is a question
I can tell you put genuine emotion into your poems, but I find it difficult to understand what you are trying to say. Brooke
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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In this poem about autumn, I'm not sure why the flowers are blooming after the rain and after the harvest - makes it sound more like a spring poem than a fall poem.
two exclamation points in three little lines seems like overkill
and I can't tell why the second line is a question
I can tell you put genuine emotion into your poems, but I find it difficult to understand what you are trying to say. Brooke
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Deniz22
You certainly have your own style. Do your religious beliefs have a known name? You're paying attractive sums of FS dollars for reviews on very short writing. Think you're getting your money's worth?
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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You certainly have your own style. Do your religious beliefs have a known name? You're paying attractive sums of FS dollars for reviews on very short writing. Think you're getting your money's worth?
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR ADVISORY REVIEW.
Comment from MM lives on :)
Too bad you didn't enter this poem in a contest Alcreator Litt Dear.. It was very well written and expressed throughout and adorned by lovely imagery.. Thanks for sharing a pleasure it was
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Too bad you didn't enter this poem in a contest Alcreator Litt Dear.. It was very well written and expressed throughout and adorned by lovely imagery.. Thanks for sharing a pleasure it was
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR SUGGESTIVE REVIEW.
Comment from write hand blue
I think I can get part of the meaning of this poem, but you need to use more understandable English in it. What is 'O' supposed to mean. I'm afraid the true meaning is buried inside your head. Punctuation is wrong...
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I think I can get part of the meaning of this poem, but you need to use more understandable English in it. What is 'O' supposed to mean. I'm afraid the true meaning is buried inside your head. Punctuation is wrong...
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
