O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from cvcopac
Yes, the introduction and preparation to natures resting period is brief. Not so many flowers, but true, the poets see the beauty. Kenny
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Yes, the introduction and preparation to natures resting period is brief. Not so many flowers, but true, the poets see the beauty. Kenny
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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Comment from misscookie
You had mjy attention all the way
I love how you tell what happens within each season
Yet through it all mother nature does her thing and lots of flowers bloom and poets have so much more to write.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
You had mjy attention all the way
I love how you tell what happens within each season
Yet through it all mother nature does her thing and lots of flowers bloom and poets have so much more to write.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR INTERESTING REVIEW.
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Your very welcome, until next time.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
From seasonal blooms to sexual enticement your true intention of this verse
lends itself to the reader's interpretations. Rather short for you; however, you say a lot with so little in the 5-7-5 formate. Enjoyable. Smiles to you.
Robin :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
From seasonal blooms to sexual enticement your true intention of this verse
lends itself to the reader's interpretations. Rather short for you; however, you say a lot with so little in the 5-7-5 formate. Enjoyable. Smiles to you.
Robin :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR CREATIVE REVIEW.
Comment from dmt1967
I like the green background it suited the poems theme very well and I like the way it flowed and the picture very well written thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
I like the green background it suited the poems theme very well and I like the way it flowed and the picture very well written thank you for sharing
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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Comment from Rondeno
But a reaper is a cutter-down of flowers, isn't he? Isn't autumn a desperate late flourishing, just before death? Wouldn't spring be a better metaphor?
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
But a reaper is a cutter-down of flowers, isn't he? Isn't autumn a desperate late flourishing, just before death? Wouldn't spring be a better metaphor?
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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Comment from dragonpoet
It seems like you are talking of a true harvest and a harvest of thoughts so a poem can bloom.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
It seems like you are talking of a true harvest and a harvest of thoughts so a poem can bloom.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR SUGGESTIVE REVIEW.
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You're welcome.
dragonpot
Comment from Norbanus
Delightful how we see the harvest moon,
although the scene is set in brilliant day.
The sun pounds down in sweating force at noon.
We see the lovely blooms with naught to say.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Delightful how we see the harvest moon,
although the scene is set in brilliant day.
The sun pounds down in sweating force at noon.
We see the lovely blooms with naught to say.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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Comment from Harlequin
Another well written short poem from you with great imagery and carefully chosen words. Good choice of photo also. Well done and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Another well written short poem from you with great imagery and carefully chosen words. Good choice of photo also. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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Comment from CR Delport
A lovely poem that is well written and well delivered. The message is clear and said in a lovely voice. Lovely art work to go with the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
A lovely poem that is well written and well delivered. The message is clear and said in a lovely voice. Lovely art work to go with the poem.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR EXCELLENT REVIEW.
Comment from Nebukadneser
Another gem from the pen of a master! What a beautiful description of autumn entering the year spawning the harvest season, which does not leave you with much time even if you work from dawn to dusk
Well done
You're a wise man
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Another gem from the pen of a master! What a beautiful description of autumn entering the year spawning the harvest season, which does not leave you with much time even if you work from dawn to dusk
Well done
You're a wise man
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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THANKS FOR WISE REVIEW.