O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very creative and expressive piece and how true. I often think of poetry like a flower, unfolding to let its beauty out. Wonderful write~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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A very creative and expressive piece and how true. I often think of poetry like a flower, unfolding to let its beauty out. Wonderful write~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR APPRECIABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Caressa_08
Few words though provokes such a message, that autumn can cause poets to really come up with such wonderful writings, even though that season might be lacking in blooms, except for that of a poet & his poetry..
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Few words though provokes such a message, that autumn can cause poets to really come up with such wonderful writings, even though that season might be lacking in blooms, except for that of a poet & his poetry..
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Oatmeal
Alcreator Litt Dear,
Your feelings are expressed well. The flow is good. Well chosen words are descriptive.
No problems, no SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Alcreator Litt Dear,
Your feelings are expressed well. The flow is good. Well chosen words are descriptive.
No problems, no SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting poem. I think the word choice is very strong. The theme is very clear. This piece inspires strong mental images.
Barbara
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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This is a very interesting poem. I think the word choice is very strong. The theme is very clear. This piece inspires strong mental images.
Barbara
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from sunnilicious
Gorgeous photograph. And such a nice thought in a short poem. Flowers blooms in spring. Nature turns yellow, red and gold in autumn. But it is a lovely sight. Good.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Gorgeous photograph. And such a nice thought in a short poem. Flowers blooms in spring. Nature turns yellow, red and gold in autumn. But it is a lovely sight. Good.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Comment from Doc Holiday
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Let the poet and the flowers bloom.
For winter is dead and new life begins.
A celebration type poem!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Let the poet and the flowers bloom.
For winter is dead and new life begins.
A celebration type poem!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Comment from Bobbi22
Just as the harvest after a drought (or too much rain) is limited, so too are the works of a poet after losing his muse. Good use of metaphors in this well written 5-7-5.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Just as the harvest after a drought (or too much rain) is limited, so too are the works of a poet after losing his muse. Good use of metaphors in this well written 5-7-5.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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Comment from Curt Mongold
Poetry, as in most things, requires certain aspects to be considered excellent. As is with most things subjective, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Your "poetry" leaves an after taste that is reminiscent of something desired, but key ingredients are missing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Poetry, as in most things, requires certain aspects to be considered excellent. As is with most things subjective, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Your "poetry" leaves an after taste that is reminiscent of something desired, but key ingredients are missing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
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Comment from redrider6612
The 5-7-5 form is perfect, but I'm not sure what the poet is trying to convey here. The final line is especially confusing because the poems begins with autumn and seems to finish with spring after asking autumn not to stay long. Winter comes after autumn, so flowers makes no sense. Nice try.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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The 5-7-5 form is perfect, but I'm not sure what the poet is trying to convey here. The final line is especially confusing because the poems begins with autumn and seems to finish with spring after asking autumn not to stay long. Winter comes after autumn, so flowers makes no sense. Nice try.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Comment from JeffreyStone
I really like this poem. What a beautiful message in so few words. Now that autumn and winter are over, the flowers and poets are blooming. You have demonstrated as much in this work. JeffreyStone
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I really like this poem. What a beautiful message in so few words. Now that autumn and winter are over, the flowers and poets are blooming. You have demonstrated as much in this work. JeffreyStone
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR CREATIVE REVIEW.
