O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from TKField
The leaves of brown came falling down, remember? In September. In the rain. Now that's poetry! This is confusing mush as usual but I kind of liked first line with the reaper and all.
Just one small suggestion ALD; It's not nice to continually shout at the poor reader with superfluous and completely unnecessary exclamation marks!!!! So give it a fucking rest already!!!!!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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The leaves of brown came falling down, remember? In September. In the rain. Now that's poetry! This is confusing mush as usual but I kind of liked first line with the reaper and all.
Just one small suggestion ALD; It's not nice to continually shout at the poor reader with superfluous and completely unnecessary exclamation marks!!!! So give it a fucking rest already!!!!!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Comment from Janet Foor
The autumn picture is lovely. It's my favorite season of the year. God certainly did create a diverse world for us to live and bloom in.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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The autumn picture is lovely. It's my favorite season of the year. God certainly did create a diverse world for us to live and bloom in.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR APPRECIABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Tina McKala
what is a creative review? it was an interesting poem, well connected to nature and it created the images of autumn well. good job.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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what is a creative review? it was an interesting poem, well connected to nature and it created the images of autumn well. good job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
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Comment from Sanku
good .this was direct address to autumn.poets do write about autumn.but flowers? may be in india some flowers do bloom.That too harvest season in india differs from place to place crop to crop .Anyway anything short is sweet isnt it?
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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good .this was direct address to autumn.poets do write about autumn.but flowers? may be in india some flowers do bloom.That too harvest season in india differs from place to place crop to crop .Anyway anything short is sweet isnt it?
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR INFORMATIVE REVIEW.
Comment from Gloria ....
Another beautiful work of art dear. You certainly have the knack for picking proper artwork and colour schemes to complement your words of harvesting. Beckoning, appealing and blooming sounds most alluring to any poet.
Keep 'em coming.
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Another beautiful work of art dear. You certainly have the knack for picking proper artwork and colour schemes to complement your words of harvesting. Beckoning, appealing and blooming sounds most alluring to any poet.
Keep 'em coming.
Gloria
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
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Comment from Frank Atwood
Love the picture you picked for this poem. Short seasons match the short time mankind has for living. The world is changing and if mankind don't change with it, Autumns will be a thing of the past as nuclear winters will devastate all seasons into one.
God bless and keep up the great writing.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Love the picture you picked for this poem. Short seasons match the short time mankind has for living. The world is changing and if mankind don't change with it, Autumns will be a thing of the past as nuclear winters will devastate all seasons into one.
God bless and keep up the great writing.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your imaginative poem makes me think of how, in the Southeastern U.S., we have more summer and winter season than spring and fall.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Your imaginative poem makes me think of how, in the Southeastern U.S., we have more summer and winter season than spring and fall.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
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Comment from Aletheia
Nature nourishes our minds and does indeed inspire the poet in all of us. Beautiful message with a lovely presentation. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking piece.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Nature nourishes our minds and does indeed inspire the poet in all of us. Beautiful message with a lovely presentation. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking piece.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR APPRECIABLE REVIEW.
Comment from isurp
Once again I will attempt to explain how your cryptic 5-7-5 strikes me. I immediately thought of the saying, "Strike while the iron is hot!" A flower blooms brilliantly for only a short time and a poet's inspirations can be fleeting. Thanks for sharing words to ponder. -Steve
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Once again I will attempt to explain how your cryptic 5-7-5 strikes me. I immediately thought of the saying, "Strike while the iron is hot!" A flower blooms brilliantly for only a short time and a poet's inspirations can be fleeting. Thanks for sharing words to ponder. -Steve
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
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Comment from guinea
Nice work here. Fall is such a beautiful time of year. Your words flow smoothly and with heart.Shows deep thinking. Your picture goes well with your words.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Nice work here. Fall is such a beautiful time of year. Your words flow smoothly and with heart.Shows deep thinking. Your picture goes well with your words.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
