O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Autumn"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from Dear Essay Reviewer
This is a Haiku in its right form.
This has the orderly syllable counting.
The poet fears early going of the reaper season.
The poet thinks when the blooming is all round why should it go.
The poet expresses very clearly the message.
It is a work to be remembered, a classic quality.
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This is a Haiku in its right form.
This has the orderly syllable counting.
The poet fears early going of the reaper season.
The poet thinks when the blooming is all round why should it go.
The poet expresses very clearly the message.
It is a work to be remembered, a classic quality.
Comment Written 14-May-2006
Comment from Sassybaby
Very nice. This makes you think of the numerous meanings. I really enjoyed it. You stayed within the standard parameters, the 5-7-5 of Haiku, you don't find many of those. Very nice indeed!
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Very nice. This makes you think of the numerous meanings. I really enjoyed it. You stayed within the standard parameters, the 5-7-5 of Haiku, you don't find many of those. Very nice indeed!
Comment Written 12-May-2006
Comment from Doreen Dulally
I'm beginning to like your
Short poems
Review but must write 'why' and 'what' you did not understand.
I'm sorry I'm probably ignorant
but honeatly I don't understand it ..Yet i do see the less you write and the more you pay ......you soon become recognised
But good luck to you if you can aford it
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I'm beginning to like your
Short poems
Review but must write 'why' and 'what' you did not understand.
I'm sorry I'm probably ignorant
but honeatly I don't understand it ..Yet i do see the less you write and the more you pay ......you soon become recognised
But good luck to you if you can aford it
Comment Written 12-May-2006
Comment from Frank Furter
ok im getting this . thank you for sharing such lovelly words and for bringing me closer to understanding peoples writings
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ok im getting this . thank you for sharing such lovelly words and for bringing me closer to understanding peoples writings
Comment Written 11-May-2006
Comment from Babette Francis
I love the Fall season. I don't feel the same about Haiku poetry. Poets, in my opinion, take big risks when writing these. But the message was clear and meaningful. Nice Job, But I have to disagree with one thing -- I bloomed in April :-)
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I love the Fall season. I don't feel the same about Haiku poetry. Poets, in my opinion, take big risks when writing these. But the message was clear and meaningful. Nice Job, But I have to disagree with one thing -- I bloomed in April :-)
Comment Written 11-May-2006
Comment from cheyennewy
I am fond of haiku, synru, cinquain, etc...they are terse but say so much more than the words we read on the surface. This haiku fills all the requirements and at the same time has a lovely message. Good word choices...well done...cheyenne
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I am fond of haiku, synru, cinquain, etc...they are terse but say so much more than the words we read on the surface. This haiku fills all the requirements and at the same time has a lovely message. Good word choices...well done...cheyenne
Comment Written 01-May-2006
Comment from volunteer angel
Your Haiku about Autumn may be ahead of time for our season right now, but it's a season when poets find plenty to write about and Mother Nature is on display for only a short time in places. Here in Florida, Autumn hangs around longer and we find many lovely scenes for our writing. Great job! Volunteer Angel
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Your Haiku about Autumn may be ahead of time for our season right now, but it's a season when poets find plenty to write about and Mother Nature is on display for only a short time in places. Here in Florida, Autumn hangs around longer and we find many lovely scenes for our writing. Great job! Volunteer Angel
Comment Written 01-May-2006
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Very interesting.
I Loved your bio.
Welcome.
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Very interesting.
I Loved your bio.
Welcome.
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Comment Written 01-May-2006
Comment from Phoenix Rysing
good job...nice haiku...I dont normally get into haiku's because they dont tell a story...but i enjoyed this one very much...thanks for sharing
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good job...nice haiku...I dont normally get into haiku's because they dont tell a story...but i enjoyed this one very much...thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-May-2006
Comment from One Tooth Smile
Alright, Alcreator. I notice you have been working hard on this haiku thing.
It's starting to pay off. I think you're definitely getting better. This was an interesting little write.
Keep up the good work!
One Tooth :)"
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Alright, Alcreator. I notice you have been working hard on this haiku thing.
It's starting to pay off. I think you're definitely getting better. This was an interesting little write.
Keep up the good work!
One Tooth :)"
Comment Written 29-Apr-2006
