O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Without the seeds of creation, the rewards of the harvest would never come about. One needs to enjoy the gathering while they can, the beauty won't last. Just as God calls, one needs to hear, for He gathers His children for a short time. Mesmerizing artwork.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Without the seeds of creation, the rewards of the harvest would never come about. One needs to enjoy the gathering while they can, the beauty won't last. Just as God calls, one needs to hear, for He gathers His children for a short time. Mesmerizing artwork.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR CREDITABLE REVIEW.
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You are very welcome. MN :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, alcreator, you did a great job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the poets that find refreshment and inspiration after a drought of words
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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this is very well written, alcreator, you did a great job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the poets that find refreshment and inspiration after a drought of words
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from hollydee
I understand all about harvesting and reaping. We are embarking on that busy time of the year for our lil farming community. Month and months of work and planning, planting, watering and nourishing for about 6 weeks total picking time -- for corn, cotton and soy beans!
In the spiritual context... we spend a lifetime of sowing seeds into other's lives in hope that they make the final harvest!
Great job!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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I understand all about harvesting and reaping. We are embarking on that busy time of the year for our lil farming community. Month and months of work and planning, planting, watering and nourishing for about 6 weeks total picking time -- for corn, cotton and soy beans!
In the spiritual context... we spend a lifetime of sowing seeds into other's lives in hope that they make the final harvest!
Great job!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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THANKS A LOT FOR THIS AWESOME, PROFESSIONAL REVIEW I DO APPRECIATE MUCH.
YOUR LITERARY WISDOM IS APPRECIABLE.
Comment from tuskantail
You say so much. You obviously enjoy writing the haiku, it seems to be your thing. I like the comparison in the last line of flowers and poets blooming. Well done.
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You say so much. You obviously enjoy writing the haiku, it seems to be your thing. I like the comparison in the last line of flowers and poets blooming. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2006
Comment from bvet61
Hey, I truly enjoyed this piece. I know you didn't like that I didn't like your last offering. This was very evocative though, and really made me feel what you were trying to say. I'd like to ask though, I don't understand the reason for the question mark in the second line. That seems more or a statement, or a request than a question. Am I reading this wrong? Thanks for the read.
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Hey, I truly enjoyed this piece. I know you didn't like that I didn't like your last offering. This was very evocative though, and really made me feel what you were trying to say. I'd like to ask though, I don't understand the reason for the question mark in the second line. That seems more or a statement, or a request than a question. Am I reading this wrong? Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2006
Comment from lovebear641
i just love autum my favorite time of the year ...such meaning in really little poem..you really have a talent for this type of writing ..hope to read more
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i just love autum my favorite time of the year ...such meaning in really little poem..you really have a talent for this type of writing ..hope to read more
Comment Written 01-Jun-2006
Comment from Elizabeth Anne
Another Haiku. These are hard to review seeing as how they hold so few words. :o)
Again you did a good job of portraying your message in the few words you had to work with. Once again I appreciate the Authors notes that you include. It proves to be helpful.
Great Job!
Liz :o)
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Another Haiku. These are hard to review seeing as how they hold so few words. :o)
Again you did a good job of portraying your message in the few words you had to work with. Once again I appreciate the Authors notes that you include. It proves to be helpful.
Great Job!
Liz :o)
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from Barbara-Anne
Excellent little haiku. You have such a short space to create an image, and yet you have managed to create multiple images here. The harvest must be short so that we will have time to write and capture all those lovely fall images on paper.
Thank you for sharing.
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Excellent little haiku. You have such a short space to create an image, and yet you have managed to create multiple images here. The harvest must be short so that we will have time to write and capture all those lovely fall images on paper.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from Adora Bayles
I never thought of it before but you're right. Harvest is a short season. Pumpkins, corn, winter squash - and in Florida, you don't have to worry much. Collards are sweet with the first cold spell. Nice, brief, colorful little verse.
Adora
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I never thought of it before but you're right. Harvest is a short season. Pumpkins, corn, winter squash - and in Florida, you don't have to worry much. Collards are sweet with the first cold spell. Nice, brief, colorful little verse.
Adora
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from Georgina Lenty
This is why I've developed a love for haiku - you can say so much in so few lines, and there doesn't even have to be a rhyme. You described autum beautifully here!
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This is why I've developed a love for haiku - you can say so much in so few lines, and there doesn't even have to be a rhyme. You described autum beautifully here!
Comment Written 31-May-2006
