O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Badger_29
I didn't realize what a genius you are with your hidden metaphors and almost ulterior motives to prove God exists. Now I understand why I write even more, I write for God., Period.
And I love you use of Earth mother also!
Blessings,
Brother � Cull
Darren
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I didn't realize what a genius you are with your hidden metaphors and almost ulterior motives to prove God exists. Now I understand why I write even more, I write for God., Period.
And I love you use of Earth mother also!
Blessings,
Brother � Cull
Darren
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
Comment from country ranch writer
This more of a rant on everything everyone does wrong in your opinion. Here is a wake up call no one is perfect and last I checked God wasn't either.
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This more of a rant on everything everyone does wrong in your opinion. Here is a wake up call no one is perfect and last I checked God wasn't either.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
This was short and sweet. I agree. You can't understand God's ways but all we can do is accept them and believe Him. We have 3 months of summer then fall, winter which is longer and then spring for a couple months but flowers blooming in Autumn wow not here. Keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing.
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This was short and sweet. I agree. You can't understand God's ways but all we can do is accept them and believe Him. We have 3 months of summer then fall, winter which is longer and then spring for a couple months but flowers blooming in Autumn wow not here. Keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
I must admit there's nothing better than flowers in a field to tempt the poet in the least of us to prize as a poetic expression to titillate the most immovable of us, well done, blessings Roy
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I must admit there's nothing better than flowers in a field to tempt the poet in the least of us to prize as a poetic expression to titillate the most immovable of us, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I seen your title as Autumn and I immediately thought did I sleep through spring and summer. I hope not but I really liked your poem and didn't see anything that needed changing :)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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I seen your title as Autumn and I immediately thought did I sleep through spring and summer. I hope not but I really liked your poem and didn't see anything that needed changing :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Comment from Eternal Muse
A beautiful poem dedicated to autumn, my favorite time of year. Fantastic picture which blends with the words. You packed volumed in these three lines, thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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A beautiful poem dedicated to autumn, my favorite time of year. Fantastic picture which blends with the words. You packed volumed in these three lines, thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
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Comment from Leineco
hmmm? Autumn? Since the poem seemingly starts with winter (harvest reaper) but progresses through summer (heat) to autumn (rain) while requesting a short stay then ends in spring (blooms)...it would seem this is more an ode to winter than autumn. Beautifully done though...I enjoyed the read
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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hmmm? Autumn? Since the poem seemingly starts with winter (harvest reaper) but progresses through summer (heat) to autumn (rain) while requesting a short stay then ends in spring (blooms)...it would seem this is more an ode to winter than autumn. Beautifully done though...I enjoyed the read
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Comment from mizzkris20
I love autumn and haiku's so therefore I like your poem, lol. I think I read a few of your other poems today. Pretty good. Keep writing. Your getting better
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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I love autumn and haiku's so therefore I like your poem, lol. I think I read a few of your other poems today. Pretty good. Keep writing. Your getting better
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Comment from mermaids
Poets, flowers bloom is a marvelous line,I like the image that it portrays. It also makes the reader feel good. Excellent 5-7-5 form that captures renewal and the feeling of aliveness.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Poets, flowers bloom is a marvelous line,I like the image that it portrays. It also makes the reader feel good. Excellent 5-7-5 form that captures renewal and the feeling of aliveness.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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Comment from ~Dovey
You met your objective of the five seven five syllable count, including the kigo, seasonal word, of harvest and nature theme which actually qualify this to be haiku. The last line definitely has a 'turn' phrase, although, flowers bloom to me suggests spring rather than autumn.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
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You met your objective of the five seven five syllable count, including the kigo, seasonal word, of harvest and nature theme which actually qualify this to be haiku. The last line definitely has a 'turn' phrase, although, flowers bloom to me suggests spring rather than autumn.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2013
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