vagabond verses
senryu9 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
Great picture to go with the message. Alliteration in every line makes a fun read. Sounds as if the muse should be insulted as the verses have no rhyme or rhythm.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Great picture to go with the message. Alliteration in every line makes a fun read. Sounds as if the muse should be insulted as the verses have no rhyme or rhythm.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Just killing time in this pandemic environment and writing anything that enters the muse; glad you like this; thank you and great weekend to you.
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your inviting picture and vivid, 5-7-5 senryu. I did not expect the emotional, final line but I could relate to it! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your inviting picture and vivid, 5-7-5 senryu. I did not expect the emotional, final line but I could relate to it! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Joan my friend, glad you like the write; as always, I am grateful to you, thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Senryu writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You followed the rules of the contest well.
We all have issues with our muses LoL
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Senryu writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You followed the rules of the contest well.
We all have issues with our muses LoL
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Hello Gypsy, glad you came; I thank you for your visit and the wonderful review.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Lovely rebelling senryu! Yes, when the muse cannot produce rhymes...well, the Gypsy goes on nonetheless and sings controversial songs on her rock, like this great senryu, where the human emotion is clearly displayed.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Lovely rebelling senryu! Yes, when the muse cannot produce rhymes...well, the Gypsy goes on nonetheless and sings controversial songs on her rock, like this great senryu, where the human emotion is clearly displayed.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Hello Marjon and thank you very much for your time and the wonderful review.
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Welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sad songs can indeed touch our hearts and evoke some tears and here your words have described a wretched scene of sorrow, loneliness and misery, an ambient write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Sad songs can indeed touch our hearts and evoke some tears and here your words have described a wretched scene of sorrow, loneliness and misery, an ambient write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Hello Dolly, very kind of you to visit; appreciate the time and the insights, thank you.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is very cute and well penned. I like the humor and wit of it, and the artistic presentation and an awesome picture.
Great imagery and originality.
I wish you luck in the contest with this strong entry.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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This is very cute and well penned. I like the humor and wit of it, and the artistic presentation and an awesome picture.
Great imagery and originality.
I wish you luck in the contest with this strong entry.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Hello friend, I thank you for your time and am glad that you like the write.
Comment from Xochellexo
Poems are hard to write especially ones that have to follow syllable counts. Amazing words in such a short poem. Love the unique words you used.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Poems are hard to write especially ones that have to follow syllable counts. Amazing words in such a short poem. Love the unique words you used.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Hello friend and thank you very much for stopping by and the wonderful review; I am pleased that you like the write.
Comment from Lobber
Hi there,
I guess it would be a horrible day for a songstress to have no songs. Could be worse - a broken lute string - or getting smashed by a killer wave.
- Lobber
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hi there,
I guess it would be a horrible day for a songstress to have no songs. Could be worse - a broken lute string - or getting smashed by a killer wave.
- Lobber
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hello Lobber and thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a cute entry for the Senryu writing prompt.
This well written verse tells a clear story.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I think this is a cute entry for the Senryu writing prompt.
This well written verse tells a clear story.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hello Sharon and thank you for your wonderful review; glad you like the write; appreciate it.
