Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent poem and perfect for the contest that I wish you all the best in if it has enough entries, I pray it will!

One suggestion I have is that they needed to be a line breakage or two throughout this poem. It would read better and you could follow it a lot better;-)

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020

Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Melodie M. I try to keep from breaking up the piece when it's all just a one word acrostic. I did change it a little and hopefully it's a little easier to read. I really appreciate the gracious stars, M. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 15-Jul-2020

;-)

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

Excellent melding of Acrostic poem and philosophy. Questionable practices are not ours to judge, so perhaps we should leave it to the One best suited to make the call.

Ogden (Don)

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020

Lol. That's for sure. Thank you fore the great review and generous stars, Don. Have a fantastic day.

reply by Ogden on 15-Jul-2020

You are most welcome, anonymous writer!
Don