THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "The Fury's Wraith"The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
6 total reviews
Comment from ngage
Another thriller, Ms. Shana. Love the book covers too! You have managed to create another action filled, suspenseful chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Nate
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Another thriller, Ms. Shana. Love the book covers too! You have managed to create another action filled, suspenseful chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Nate
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thanks Nate :)
You're always a motivator to me! So happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter. Stay safe and have a great weekend!
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from fm wright
Truly awesome pictures in words you have written. It was if I could see each scene upon a screen. Your descriptions are full of raw emotion. Really love this chapter.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Truly awesome pictures in words you have written. It was if I could see each scene upon a screen. Your descriptions are full of raw emotion. Really love this chapter.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Faye :)
Sorry it took me so long to thank you. I've been out of town camping. It's always a pleasure to read your reviews. You're an encouragement and a great motivator. Thanks again for all your kind words.
Stay safe and have a great weekend!
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from cdefan
Another action packed chapter! Love your book covers. The artwork is fantastic.
I like your evil characters you've created. The fury seems to have the Breedline worried. Your rewrite sounds more clear and it's easier to follow. Great job! Keep them coming!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Another action packed chapter! Love your book covers. The artwork is fantastic.
I like your evil characters you've created. The fury seems to have the Breedline worried. Your rewrite sounds more clear and it's easier to follow. Great job! Keep them coming!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you, cdefan :)
Glad you enjoyed another chapter. It's been tasking rewriting my books and getting them ready to be republished, but hearing your reviews makes it worth it.
Thanks again,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
The collective power seems too great for all the breed line's armoury at this stage. And it seems like it's not enough to stand against the fury, but I'm sure that something else can bring them down. Even though they appear to be invincible we know that Heaven has the power to overcome them. A great action episode, well practised is your ability to write these action scenes, well done Shana, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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The collective power seems too great for all the breed line's armoury at this stage. And it seems like it's not enough to stand against the fury, but I'm sure that something else can bring them down. Even though they appear to be invincible we know that Heaven has the power to overcome them. A great action episode, well practised is your ability to write these action scenes, well done Shana, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Roy :)
Glad you enjoyed this chapter. It's been tasking to rewrite, but worth it after reading your reviews. I'm so sorry I am just now thanking you. I just got back into town from a relaxing camp site.
Thanks again for all your support!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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You?re fine, dear girl, never apologise.
Comment from Mistydawn
No! You can't leave us hanging like this. You're mean, heartless, downright cruel lol. You know I'll be back for more. Your chapter is very well-written, so suspenseful. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. I so wish I had a six to give the chapter is so deserving, but I'm all out.
PS. Hollywood needs to produce your stories instead of this low-budget, poorly written crap. Maybe then more people will like sci-fi, the supernatural.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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No! You can't leave us hanging like this. You're mean, heartless, downright cruel lol. You know I'll be back for more. Your chapter is very well-written, so suspenseful. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. I so wish I had a six to give the chapter is so deserving, but I'm all out.
PS. Hollywood needs to produce your stories instead of this low-budget, poorly written crap. Maybe then more people will like sci-fi, the supernatural.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Mistydawn :)
Sorry it took me a bit to get back to you. I have been out of town relaxing at a great camp site.
I always love hearing what you think of my chapters. Sorry to leave you hanging. LOL! Trust me, they always turn out with a fairytale ending. Although it's been tasking rewriting my books, reading your reviews makes it all worthwhile.
I wish my books could be made into film. I'm thinking of sending them to Netflix when I'm finished republishing them. All they can say is no. It's worth the try. Thanks for believing in me! Have a great weekend!
Hugs,
Shana :)
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I hope you had a great vacation. You're absolutely right all they can say is no. You'll never know if you don't try, right?
Comment from sibhus
A great action scene that has sense of the mayhem of a major battle. I'm just questioning your use of cliches, hit by a semi, and fell like a ton of bricks. Possibly something a little more original would flow better with the other wise stirring piece of action. Just a thought, other than that this a well written action chapter.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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A great action scene that has sense of the mayhem of a major battle. I'm just questioning your use of cliches, hit by a semi, and fell like a ton of bricks. Possibly something a little more original would flow better with the other wise stirring piece of action. Just a thought, other than that this a well written action chapter.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you, sibhus :)
I appreciate your advice. I will definitely take it. That's why I enjoy getting feedback here. Everyone has been so helpful.
Thanks again!
Have a great weekend,
Shana :)
